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okay 👍 Will trust you word on this.

my man author it feels bad to know your work was stolen.bur People who are reading this novel are interested in sport and dont't prefer mixing other thing like he is a hier to an ancient family or other thing blue lock is a pure sport novel focusing on football, football competition and character building.your mixing other thing made us lose interest instantly .I feel it has great potential and the story was well written with great detail so if you are willing to make changes i think it will be great but at the end of day it is your novel your story but we as reader like this story so please don't make us hate this story as we come like this novel

Good luck with your exam

i liked the writing story telling and depth of realism in you writing but the story mc is already op and has finished everything that needs to be done so there is no expectations and thrill.The mc has struggle in story but we don't know anything I think the story concept was good but mc story development is already finished so reader don't expect much

great chapter

This feels like a great book and has good potential but the problem with these books is that they are great at start and and as chapter increase they lose their potential or the story becomes predictable So i hope for this book to be great book and the translation was Great keep up the good work

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

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