The World's Consciousness

(Read till chapter 6) At first it was confusing, but as the story progressed things started to get more clearer and intriguing. The sentences ends slightly abruptly along with the change in background setting. However, the characters' actions and the MC's pov is nicely described. The narration is so good that the story has become interesting right from the beginning. The vocabulary used is also very simple, so even if someone's new to this genre it will be a smooth ride for them to understand things. But yeah, you'll have to hang on for a while since the author describes everything gradually and not right at the beginning.

I'll start by saying that this story reminds me of one of my fav anime's in a way. Now unto the review. I think you have an amazing plot and storyline. The progression of the story and the pacing is fantastic and I love the fact that there aren't many info dumps or filler paragraphs as you'd expect from stories of this genre. Not that info dumps are bad. In fact, they are essential sometimes. But the absence of it makes your book easy to read and enjoy. My critique, however, is the use of grammar and choice of words when you explain certain things. Some words you use are confusing and don't exactly fit into the context of what you're trying to express and I'd suggest you get an editing app that can help you detect typos and grammar mistakes to make things easier for you while you write and edit bc as writers, we can't notice every single error on our own. Asides that, your book is pretty interesting even with the few chapters I've read so far! Good job!

I love this novel it has pretty good writing and potential I cant wait to see what the author does with the story, i would defo recommend its a entertaining read and a breath of fresh air

I usually didn't like this kind of genre. Even with this kind of handicap. I still find this story worth to read and interesting. Especially the story telling, the way the author describe the situation was epic. It was fluid and hooked me as a reader. It also reminded just how important description of place and situation is! Well, because of a long chapter or just my own fault. I sometimes lose my sight on who's talking, who talking to who in dialogue. I hope that's only me who felt it like that~ Anyway Great job author!

The story is interesting and the idea for the story is intriguing. The writing is good but at the same time is confusing. I wanted to read more but at the same time, I don’t. The chapter is too long. I understand if it was to describe a fight scene, but these chapters is just conversation and more information that I get bored halfway through the chapter. There’s potential definitely, but I think author should show more than telling.

I love your world design amazing, story is told in a detailed and immersive manner including your novel cover. First piece that I found intriguing.

I love this concept of a world ridden with demons. Such a thought-out storyline and plot. Characters are mysterious, especially the way we don't know anything about their past makes it really intriguing. Highly recommended, can't wait to read more.

Such a fun read! It had alot of different elements to it that made it flow really well, and gathered my imagination placing there characters where they werer in each chapter, I really look forward to more!

This novel is one of apocalypse novels but if you feel like it would be the same cliche your definitly wrong Different perspectives used in the book make you feel like your overwatching the world itself and author managed to draw it in a way that gets you immeresed in his art. i.e. the great book he has written

Wow, fantastic novel! The flow is perfect, and the writing style really captivates the reader and makes them hungry for more. (Do recommend shortening the chapters to 1.5-2K words). I love the character and world background also. Keep writing this amazing piece! 100% recommend.

A great book that I came across quite by accident!
 The author tried to build a whole world, fascinating. I hope the author can keep up a steady flow of updates. I'm curious about the rest of the story!

Everything about this story is perfect. I would give it ten stars if I could. The author is very talented. I really enjoy reading this story. The mysteries are subtle but very effective. Excellent storytelling.

Alright,I am carried away. The book has impeccable flow and the structure is properly though out. The characters have a history and it's all the more interesting trying to understand how they round up. In total,I really love this book. Well done

Just bu the description im already in live with it!! This definitely needs more attention and i cant wait to see it get what it deserves!! Absolutely love it!!

Whenever I read something, fantasy is my usual go to. And this book really doesn't disappoint. I read first four chapters and I am already looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍

All I have to say is that this is.... Super interesting!!!! This book is superb Love how it goes smoothly. Please do continue to update this. Great work author 👍

Writing stability is impeccable. The way the words are used to describe the situation and setting are very beautifully written. This author clearly has amazing English skills and grammer. The world building is very interesting and unique. Though I have seen the ‘districts’ in other stories that have demons I still think it’s very cool. The character design is good. I have no complains on it and I think the characters have realistic personalities. So I have not much to say about that. The story hasn’t developed that much but that’s understandable as their have only been 5 chapters. Overall I have no complaints about this book and it is the most decent one I have seen in days. It has great potential. I’m sure the more you update the more chance you have of getting contracted. I have nothing to advise and I hope your story updates so I can read more. It is very intriguing and I anticipate for the next update! ☺️

I love how the story revolves around the demons that have caused death for over many and the person who can defeat those demons is with kai or something. The cover of the novel is enticing enough to look forward to what's next. I am currently on chapter 2 but I guess I have to read it all, hope the author writes more, and good luck fellow novelist!

The cover it's self is creepy. So I bet the novel has a lot of creepy stuff. I've been through the prologue and the first chapter and I gotta say it's more of a poem to me; it's interesting and speaks to me in a different light. There are few chapters so I hope the author can work hard to publish more and maintain a stable update stability. Except for a few grammatical errors everything else is well crafted and well thought. Kudos to the author

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