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The Viltrumite Irregular

Auteur: SwayStar
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What is The Viltrumite Irregular

Lisez le roman The Viltrumite Irregular écrit par l'auteur SwayStar publié sur WebNovel. A man born in Viltrum manifests unusual powers. Growing up with teachings of viltrumites, he believes his cause is just. He begins to question their philosophy after spending time on Earth....

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A man born in Viltrum manifests unusual powers. Growing up with teachings of viltrumites, he believes his cause is just. He begins to question their philosophy after spending time on Earth.

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First a note to readers of my other novels: My releases for Potion Maker have slowed immensly because of a mental block, a mental block caused by all these web novel Ideas flooding my mind. Oh, I also plan on redoing Bread System, I want to adjust the four chapters so I can resume typing it. Just like Bread System, this isn't my main novel, so the release rate will be slow.. Well, only if I am wrestling with my own mind, otherwise I'll try to release regularly once a week. Hopefully typing this will help clear my mind so I can put out more chapters for Potion Maker. -This will be typed using my phone, so excuse the occasional misstypes, I'll try to catch any that appear- A universe, the oldest amongst all in existence has started to lose stability. Not in a bad way, no, it had a massive surge of power as it was raising to a level no universe has ever risen before. What would the gains be? An energy hundreds of times stronger than primordial chaos with a hundred times more purity. A better environment for the lifeforms inhabiting it, and more resources for them to gain more power, if they can pass the universe's tests in the form of the usual heavenly tribulations. Otherwise they lose their life, or cultivation, or become a vegetable.. Well, the universe is fair, but has to maintain balance as well. It can't have everyone becoming immortal, right? Because the universe rose to a level that never existed before, it started to collapse inwards. It was about to fail. That was until, the very center of the universe, which is the will of the universe, its mind so to speak, slammed into the corpse of a fifteen year old young man, and merged with the boy's body. This caused the universe to collapse inwards as a whole and be absorbed by the boy's body. After the body reconstructed, the universe successfully gained it's own body, and prevented the lifeforms it once created from dying meaningless deaths. Instead they all died and like the universe itself, planets, lifeforms, energies, all souls, and knowledge, became one with the young man's body. The universe was named Father Of All, for he started existence itself. Now gaining a body, he took the name Shen Mu. "This was the only way to prevent a total reset, I managed to keep everything and the new level of power.. The deaths of my children, they can live through me... You haven't died in vain.." The eyes of Shen Mu reflected a vast universe as he opened a rift to the youngest universe in existence. "First I will have some adventures of my own, then I will rebuild what I once had. My children might not have lived all they could have, but the will play apart in my creating of something even greater!" This was written on a whim, I may fix the synapsis later. But this is the gist of it, and I don't need to write a prologue now do I?

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ThePandaCritic
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Grammar is ok. The premise of the story was interesting. Why not the story of how he grew to become so strong or how he concur that planet with 3 year. Nope, you choose to send him to earth to go to school tf why? This dude is a warrior bread for destruction, hand-picked by their leader and I want me to believe they just allowed him to go to earth as some sort of a vacation. The story became after the whole earth incident. There is no room to grow power-wise. Maybe in character but I'm not here for a slice of life.

SwayStar
SwayStarAuteurSwayStar

Shameless Author Review! Sue me. ......................................................................................

adeadlegend
adeadlegendLv10adeadlegend

The main character is a simp. We're splitting up. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

A_Stupid_Story
A_Stupid_StoryLv1A_Stupid_Story

It's a really good book And i hope you will give a good reason for him turning against the vultrumite empire..... Easy 5 stars ...................

SurelyNotEli
SurelyNotEliLv3SurelyNotEli

Unique premise + plus the grammar and writing is well done??? Easy five stars

TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13TreacherousVoid

How long has it been since i was sincerely excited about and wholeheartedly able to enjoy a novel? I feel like its been years! I am proud to say this novel, though new, and not without its flaws has earned a 5 star review from me. One of the very few ive given out. Because there are only 17 chapters out, My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined, but alas, ill be back in a few months to binge read again! Great work here author (if you drop this….You better be ready for the consequences)

DOKKAEBII
DOKKAEBIILv14DOKKAEBII

I really like this fic! I like that you chose her as the love interest and that you don’ get swayed by upset comments because they want to see Anissa or eve, both of which are overused and ruin the story of most fics, I’ve seen Anissa work once and eve ends up cucking mark for no reason and she’s always the fl in invincible works. I hope you keep updating as this is my favorite up and coming fan fic to read. I also really like the way you wrote Taz’s character with how looks down on everyone and has the strength to back it up. Not many stoic MLs on this site, and how he defends FL as she’ his woman and who would dare to talk to his woman that way. I see a lot of potential in this as the story progresses and I’m really looking forward to the viltrumite invasion. Ps my favorite “scene” is the eating in the Chinese restaurant. Displays Taz’s character and his relationship with earthlings as a whole

the_banana_catfrfr
the_banana_catfrfrLv1the_banana_catfrfr

the only reason i checked this novel is because of dc light human but it turns out this one is also very good ovjoevjiodfvkdfdfvfdjvklfvkldfjvkfjvlkf

JOKER_JAY
JOKER_JAYLv4JOKER_JAY

This story is very good and I'm looking forward to seeing how this story will progress. And please don't drop this cuz it would be a shame if it was so keep up the good work.

DaoistOwcKbp
DaoistOwcKbpLv1DaoistOwcKbp

It has been a very good and interesting start. Let's hope you continue with the good work and this novel is not abandoned like the other invincible novels.[img=recommend]

Havabjamw
HavabjamwLv4Havabjamw

easily one of the best invincible fanfic that i have ever read. chad mc + violence and gore. just like the tv show and the comics...........

rak_iwal
rak_iwalLv4rak_iwal

it's is really good!!!.....a must read!! but why did you change the cover it was so good and depicted the current arc soooo wellll.

Darth_Evolution898
Darth_Evolution898Lv14Darth_Evolution898

Very well written the main character doesn't seem out of place in the story. As well as the Grammer and pacing being perfect highly recommend.

DarlingNico
DarlingNicoLv14DarlingNico

The story is great and I have fun reading it. A lo more fun than any other novels I’ reading right now. The emotions and character development is superb and is making me itch for more.

PriamustheBright
PriamustheBrightLv12PriamustheBright

There should be more Invincible docs but sadly there isn’t. This book is good read I would highly recommend to my friends. What’s special is adding the kryptonian abilities.

Jhonathan_Carrasco
Jhonathan_CarrascoLv4Jhonathan_Carrasco

I really love this story so please keep it up.!

Luis_Salinas_8936
Luis_Salinas_8936Lv3Luis_Salinas_8936

I hope the next part comes out soon because this is great

Lost_Wanderer
Lost_WandererLv4Lost_Wanderer

Enjoyed everthing about the story and just wished it continued

hellspawn3933938
hellspawn3933938Lv4hellspawn3933938

good store 👍 can't wait for the next chapter 👍

Milton_Villarreal_9111
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