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SwayStar
SwayStarAuthor2yr
2022-05-16 13:18

Shameless Author Review! Sue me. ......................................................................................

The Viltrumite Irregular

SwayStar
4.6
43 Chs

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Dieudonner_17
Dieudonner_17Lv5

Is it harem

2yr
Reimoss
ReimossLv14

black mc bye

2yr
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GigaGiant22
GigaGiant22Lv4

Whoa racist much don’t you think? What wrong with a black MC?

Reimoss:black mc bye
2yr
6
Reimoss
ReimossLv14

Not being able to resonate🤷🏻‍♂️ I don't have anything with you but I don't wanna be you

GigaGiant22:Whoa racist much don’t you think? What wrong with a black MC?
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2yr
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DOKKAEBII
DOKKAEBIILv14

Imagine being racist with 700 hours on Webnovel

Reimoss:black mc bye
2yr
5
Reimoss
ReimossLv14

Imagine still thinking blacks are victims

DOKKAEBII:Imagine being racist with 700 hours on Webnovel
2yr
2
KornKob
KornKobLv5

Imagine being that privileged and ignorant 🤦🏾‍♂️

Reimoss:Imagine still thinking blacks are victims
2yr
9
Reimoss
ReimossLv14

Not everyone is american and priviledged, you are just lazy and find excuses

KornKob:Imagine being that privileged and ignorant 🤦🏾‍♂️
2yr
2
KornKob
KornKobLv5

Definitely an idiot, starts bringing things out of context.

Reimoss:Not everyone is american and priviledged, you are just lazy and find excuses
2yr
3
God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14

what???

Reimoss:black mc bye
2yr
1
God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14

ignoring the stuff on top is there gonna be any romance

2yr
1
ChillinVillain
ChillinVillainLv4

Reimoss:black mc bye
2yr
2
Barbatos_Immortal
Barbatos_ImmortalLv3

thanks for warning, i dont like it either!

Reimoss:black mc bye
2yr
Mr0Rabbit
Mr0RabbitLv14

God_of_hentai:ignoring the stuff on top is there gonna be any romance
2yr
1
God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14

WAIT I KNEW THAT CUZ I READ THIS ALREADY😂😂😂

Mr0Rabbit:
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2yr
Mr0Rabbit
Mr0RabbitLv14

I suspected but I thought to deem you with an answer nonetheless

God_of_hentai:WAIT I KNEW THAT CUZ I READ THIS ALREADY😂😂😂
2yr
God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14

no i forgot i read this 😂😂 so i was genuinely happy for the romance

Mr0Rabbit:I suspected but I thought to deem you with an answer nonetheless
2yr
arekuruutento
arekuruutentoLv12

hol up wait a min, something ain't right... How is it hard for you to resonate with a black Mc?, what's the difference between your color and his?, maybe personality but jeez really?, I ain't white but I read and write about white Mcs, and I can understand not being able to read about a girl Mc (I can't btw), but you're not able to read about a black mc???, sounds childish to me, and the fact that you decided to announce that, shows how much your racist side is leaking. I don't even know why I bothered writing this, your comment really irked me, my bad.

Reimoss:Not being able to resonate🤷🏻‍♂️ I don't have anything with you but I don't wanna be you
2yr
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arekuruutento
arekuruutentoLv12

so is it harem or not?

God_of_hentai:no i forgot i read this 😂😂 so i was genuinely happy for the romance
2yr
1
God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14

uh no but the romance is adorable

arekuruutento:so is it harem or not?
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2yr
Other Reviews
ThePandaCritic
ThePandaCriticLv1

Grammar is ok. The premise of the story was interesting. Why not the story of how he grew to become so strong or how he concur that planet with 3 year. Nope, you choose to send him to earth to go to school tf why? This dude is a warrior bread for destruction, hand-picked by their leader and I want me to believe they just allowed him to go to earth as some sort of a vacation. The story became after the whole earth incident. There is no room to grow power-wise. Maybe in character but I'm not here for a slice of life.

2yr

adeadlegend
adeadlegendLv10

The main character is a simp. We're splitting up. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

2yr
A_Stupid_Story
A_Stupid_StoryLv2

It's a really good book And i hope you will give a good reason for him turning against the vultrumite empire..... Easy 5 stars ...................

2yr
SurelyNotEli
SurelyNotEliLv4

Unique premise + plus the grammar and writing is well done??? Easy five stars

2yr
TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13

How long has it been since i was sincerely excited about and wholeheartedly able to enjoy a novel? I feel like its been years! I am proud to say this novel, though new, and not without its flaws has earned a 5 star review from me. One of the very few ive given out. Because there are only 17 chapters out, My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined, but alas, ill be back in a few months to binge read again! Great work here author (if you drop this….You better be ready for the consequences)

2yr
DOKKAEBII
DOKKAEBIILv14

I really like this fic! I like that you chose her as the love interest and that you don’ get swayed by upset comments because they want to see Anissa or eve, both of which are overused and ruin the story of most fics, I’ve seen Anissa work once and eve ends up cucking mark for no reason and she’s always the fl in invincible works. I hope you keep updating as this is my favorite up and coming fan fic to read. I also really like the way you wrote Taz’s character with how looks down on everyone and has the strength to back it up. Not many stoic MLs on this site, and how he defends FL as she’ his woman and who would dare to talk to his woman that way. I see a lot of potential in this as the story progresses and I’m really looking forward to the viltrumite invasion. Ps my favorite “scene” is the eating in the Chinese restaurant. Displays Taz’s character and his relationship with earthlings as a whole

2yr
the_banana_catfrfr
the_banana_catfrfrLv1

the only reason i checked this novel is because of dc light human but it turns out this one is also very good ovjoevjiodfvkdfdfvfdjvklfvkldfjvkfjvlkf

2yr
JOKER_JAY
JOKER_JAYLv4

This story is very good and I'm looking forward to seeing how this story will progress. And please don't drop this cuz it would be a shame if it was so keep up the good work.

2yr
DaoistOwcKbp
DaoistOwcKbpLv1

It has been a very good and interesting start. Let's hope you continue with the good work and this novel is not abandoned like the other invincible novels.[img=recommend]

2yr
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