Making a name for myself

Alright lets get stuff straight. First of all grammar sucks, would appreciate if you guys help out and give constructive criticism and not bitch. Second if you are only going to bitch then get the fuck out I guess cause there's no reason for you to be here if you're only going to bitch. And third I hope you enjoy. Also gonna change some things which will be a wish.

[Talking]

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'Thoughts'

"Quote"

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*Bang*Bang*Bang*

[AH SHIT! I just HAD to take a damn shortcut.]I say to myself while hiding behind a car. I was walking home and I live in a horrible area because I couldn't afford anything better, and tonight I decided I should head home faster through a shortcut but got caught up in a shootout between two gangs in my neighborhood and that brings me here, crouched and hiding behind a car.

'OK OK OK. I have to make a run for it to my apartment if I'm going to live and get to it. Ok, 3...2...1... GO!'I yell to myself inside my mind after hearing the shots stop but then I hear them shooting again and but ignore it and I feel something hit my back but ignore it from the adrenaline and pure thoughts just to get to my apartment. I then make it to my apartment and walk in and close the door behind me but then all of a sudden feel weak and look down and blood coming out my stomach and fall down.

[Ah shit. *coughs up blood*So thats what that was, *sigh* I have nothing left in this world anyway, so why should I care.*coughs up more blood*I'm tired... I'm going to just sleep.]And thats how I died, at least I thought I did, but then I ended up here, in a vast expanse of nothing, scared out of my mind because my worst fear was always that when I die I'd just be there, alone, forever. Bu then everything light's up and an old looking person appeared out of nowhere.

[Poor child, I pity you, your death and life was sad. My name to most people is God, so I will give you another chance with 5 wishes into Tokyo Ghoul seeing as it was one of your favorite anime's.]He said to me which made me freak out because I never thought I'd get a chance like this, even if it's out of pity i don't care.

[Alright I want first, to have an Ukaku and Rinkaku

Second, I want to look like Sung Jin-Woo after being registered as a S rank hunter as a natural one eyed ghoul in my right eye

Third, want to do the world building of Tokyo Ghoul cause I want to change somethings

Fourth, I want Complete control over my Kagune and body

Fifth, I want to keep my memories seeing as you didn't mention keeping them.]I said to God.

[Alright, now how would you want to change the world.]He said to me and I proceeded to tell him how I want to change it.

[Alright go through that portal, I'll be watching you, those changes you made should be entertaining especially with you there.]He said and a portal appeared on my left and I walk through but not before thanking God.

(6 Years Later)

[Touka! Come on and play with me!]I said to Touka Kirishima, yes you heard right. Right now I'm dragging Touka to play with me outside to play with me.

[Hey Ryu! If she doesn't want to play with you then leave her alone.]Kaneki said to me seeing me dragging Touka.

[Oh come on Ken! You want to play, right Touka?]I said turning to her.

[Yeah it's fine Kaneki.]She said with a reassuring smile to my older brother.

[*sigh*Alright.]He said before walking away with a book, he's still a book worm even young. Right now I'm in Anteiku, my name is Ryu Kaneki, a half ghoul where I live with my human older brother, Ken Kaneki. Now you may wonder why I'm at Anteiku, well it's cause the changes I made to the world. So Kaneki's mom died at birth, he then got with my mom, who was a ghoul, and she got pregnant 3 months later and I was born 9 months after and then my mom disappeared. My father knew she was a ghoul but still accepted it, but he knew he couldn't raise me, much less me and Kaneki, so he left us at Anteiku where they took us in and I made Touka my age, and her go to Anteiku immediately after losing her father. Along with Hinami who I'm friends with and made Akira my age as well. When Yoshimura found us I purposely showed my one ghoul eye to him so he knew I was half ghoul. Me and Touka are outside now but then I hear something behind me so I look and see Hinami.

[Hey Ryu, Touka!]I hear Hinami say coming to us with her mother behind her.

[Hey Hinami! Wanna play with us?]I ask her and she nods to my question and we go and play, and that's how I spent my years.

(4 Years Later)

It's been 10 years since I've come to this world and I'm 10 today and getting my Ghoul mask today. Right now me and Touka just arrived at Uta's place and walked in and see a bunch of stands with masks and see one covered and know he's there so I go up to it and knock on his head and say

[Come on Uta, get out of there. You're not gonna scare me.]I say to him with an annoyed tone and take off the cover on him and see him sitting there.

[Oh, to bad. In my opinion though everyone needs a good scare.]He said and then got off the stand.

[Yeah, yeah, whatever. But where's my mask?]I asked him.

[Ah, here it is.]He said going to a stand and grabbing a black fox mask with red accents which is based off Tanjiro's from demon slayer and then he hands it to me.

[Thanks!]'Now I can make a name for myself.'I thought to myself while walking out with my mask.

(That Night at 11th Ward)

[So this is the guy, huh. Multiple accounts of **** and murder, and they call us the monsters. Eh whatever, Ima eat him anyway, if I'm going to kill, might as do a favor to humanity and kill these assholes.]I say to myself on a roof looking at an abandoned building. I'm wearing the Akatsuki robes with my mask, it's surprising how easily it was to track the guy, but I guess when everyone mainly focuses on ghouls you don't really need to be cautious and cover your tracks that much. I then jump down and enter.

[HELLO! I'm looking for one serial killer and rapist! Wanna show yourself?]I yell out since he can't runaway anyway cause I could just track his scent and hear if he runs. I then see a crazed looking guy walk around a pillar.

[Oh, you're a guy. Well whatever, It'll be fun enough watching you beg for mercy!]He said with obvious disdain and then crazed like and starts running at me with a knife to which I could only sneer at since I don't know if he didn't notice that I'm wearing a mask which ghouls will wear sometimes or just ignore it but I let him try to stab me. Then as expected it broke the blade of the knife and then he made a face of realization and dread and tries to run but I use my Ukaku and shoot him in his tendons so he can't run.{A/N:Is it me or when they shoot their Ukaku it sounds like a M134 Minigun?}

[You know, most people think of ghouls as the dark side of humanity. But it's you people that are overshadowed by us so ghouls so you run rampant, but Ima do humanity a favor and get rid of the people like you.]I say and then start to eat him and then leave a picture of myself with my mask and purposely show both eyes so they see I'm one eyed and give me credit since I need to make a name but can't if no one sees anything. And thats how I planned on spending my years till cannon, but never in 20th Ward and leave no actual evidence of myself except my mask since I don't want to be kicked out from Anteiku.