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The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]

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You have heard of the Targaryens with their Dragons, you have heard of the Valeryons with their ships and wealth, but what about the third Valyrian House, House Celtigar? They lack the lustrous qualities of the remaining Valyrians, and they don't possess formidable dragons or an armada that could easily conquer any shoreline. Moreover, they're not considered the wealthiest of the noble houses, leaving them in the realm of mediocrity. Their status is so humble that even the other two ancient houses do not consider them worthy enough to represent the prestigious name of Old Valyria. However, amidst this seeming insignificance, a man had reincarnated among them with a simple, yet grand vision - to elevate House Celtigar to new heights and earn the respect of the other great houses. ====== I use ChatGPT to fix the grammar and to make the dialog more 'suitable' for the times, so maybe there's some mistakes or cringey phrases. all stuff except oc are not mine. ====== Right, so this is a reupload of the fanfic of the same name. I 'lost' my account(I used the same email for two accounts, hence got locked out of the one I wrote my fanfic in). I'll continue to update the fanfic in this one now, not the old one. It's been so long since I've written anything, so go easy on me. If there's any typo or grammatical mistakes, feel free to point it out, just be nice about it.

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Volume 4 :Year 123 - 130 AC — Adult
Volume 3 :Year 107 - 115 AC — Young Adult
Volume 2 :Year 104 - 107 AC — Teenage Years

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joe_caa
joe_caaLv2joe_caa

the entire story seems too convenient for the mc. The mc has literally faced no setbacks, opposition and struggle. The way he confidently dismisses more powerful people than him is frankly laughably absurd because we all know he ain't that smart and charismatic enough to not get burned by daemon or ruined by his own hubris.

KK9494
KK9494Lv4KK9494

It's a good one, I like it. Trust me in this. I tried to write a HOTD SI fanfic myself, so I can speak with experience this is a good fanfic

SonDio
SonDioLv4SonDio

This novel might get more attention if it is published in June, but I have little to say about the whole thing. It needs more development and much more kingdom construction but it's coming, good story.

Bob_Bob_8597
Bob_Bob_8597Lv3Bob_Bob_8597

Really good novel to be honest. Pacing is good and the story is new and cool with good grammar. One of the best Game of Thrones fan fictions out there

ssyffix
ssyffixLv4ssyffix

Gave me crabs once. 5/5 would crab again

L0st_3368
L0st_3368Lv4L0st_3368

Recently re-read the old fanfic because I enjoyed it so much. Really glad your picking it back up.

RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv3RegalObscure

While I personally didn't like this work. I am giving a 5 star just to offset joe_caa abysmal review.

NyxOuroboros
NyxOuroborosLv11NyxOuroboros

How the hell could this masterpiece have gone unnoticed? . . .

Mr_Scrutiny
Mr_ScrutinyLv4Mr_Scrutiny

if you drop this I swear to God I'll find you and kill you one or the other.

Aniket_Aggarwal
Aniket_AggarwalLv4Aniket_Aggarwal

One of the best and most unique HOTD fanfics, its enjoyable to read a non targaryen mc fanfics, please keep updating...

Luis_Salinas_8936
Luis_Salinas_8936Lv4Luis_Salinas_8936

I can’t wait for the next part to come out

Darkiling
DarkilingLv1Darkiling

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pp_pp_pp
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i don't usually like asoiaf fanfic but it's pretty good. it's pretty well paced for my taste and the dialogue is interesting, with it being enhanced by the choice of words the author/chatgpt used. my main gripe is the lingo is sometimes a bit too much, and there's some parts that the ai ruined that haven't been edited yet. overall, great use of chatgpt, unlike 90% of the fanfic in this app which just copy paste the content that has been paraphrased by the ai and didn't edit it at all.

Blighty_1004
Blighty_1004Lv2Blighty_1004

It's fantastic to see this story back again!! I am happy to see the use of a underutilised house, will we see the MC venturing to Essos at all? Keep up the good work!!

Theghost_
Theghost_Lv4Theghost_

Welcome back bro. Read your fic like 5 times and don’t forget to make him learn sword fighting🤌

Aria_sakti
Aria_saktiLv13Aria_sakti

awesome story, love the MC, love the realistic timeline, love the fast Pace, absolutely amazing story

SUPER_BOY
SUPER_BOYLv3SUPER_BOY

this story so far is great overall this is a great house of the dragon fan fic keep it up i love the characters and i can't wait to see your take on the dance and how the celtigar fit in the dance than the original one in fire and blood keep it up.

FluffyPanda44
FluffyPanda44Lv4FluffyPanda44

I LOVE this fanfic! It has the potential to become one of the best ASOIAF fanfics on this app. I had doubts when I saw it but reading it (as of 16 chapters), that doubt is so far gone, a black hole has sucked it up.

Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Jerman_R_5720
Jerman_R_5720Lv12Jerman_R_5720

Update your book I want more ch on attack titan of game thrones

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