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The Battles of Hearts (Naruto)

Auteur: The_Mystry
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Lisez le roman The Battles of Hearts (Naruto) écrit par l'auteur The_Mystry publié sur WebNovel. Honestly, I designed Naruto's personality in opposite the Manga/Anime. Although Naruto is my favorite, I wanted to craft a character who experiences betrayal from a loved one and becomes cold hearted,...

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Honestly, I designed Naruto's personality in opposite the Manga/Anime. Although Naruto is my favorite, I wanted to craft a character who experiences betrayal from a loved one and becomes cold hearted, this is the story of Naruto the Military Commando. In my story, his son, Aqua Hoshino, differs from the original Oshi No Ko character. I wasn't fond of how Aqua toyed with Akane and Kana's hearts, so I created him to be the son that Naruto truly deserves. I hope you enjoy my narrative.

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the author asked for feedback on what I read and I can say that it was written quite well, since I’ve been reading short stories or ff I’ve already stopped paying attention to grammar, it’s not so important if you’re a new writer, because the most important thing is the plot, here the plot is not bad, but unfortunately for me it is at the level of drama of Chinese short stories, as usual, everyone turned their backs on the main character and abandoned everyone and he decided to return to his former life and again become a withdrawn idiot so that in the end he would get a happy ending, I don’t I say that this is bad, this is the usual cliche with all the things that have to happen, plus the combination of incompatible plot and characters is not bad at all, and it is clear that the author wanted to correctly convey the very essence of the characters and their feelings about their loved ones and how they want to be close to them, but for me it’s not like I could read and wait for continuation, I read everything that was there and because I was drunk and I was bored, and yet I’m here and sharing my opinion, still in the same state, and yet I I believe that there will be people who will like it and they will decide to support the author in his endeavors, and I also wish the author good luck, peace:з

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