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Tangled journey in Harry Potter.

Auteur: MordredIVV
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Lisez le roman Tangled journey in Harry Potter. écrit par l'auteur MordredIVV publié sur WebNovel. WARNING- The author its not an English native-speaker, sorry about the grammatic errors.We are following our MC in his rebirth in the HP world, but with a much more complicated world that in the canno...

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WARNING- The author its not an English native-speaker, sorry about the grammatic errors. We are following our MC in his rebirth in the HP world, but with a much more complicated world that in the cannon, with a priviliged mind, eidetic memory and the previous knowledge of his previous life as his goldfinger.

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"Are you willing to kill or be killed?" That's where his journey started. He chose to kill. ...... "I want my mommy." Nathan said. with tears dripping from his eyes. "If you go to them, you will be killed, boy. You might even endangered the life of your twin brother. Why not give them hope that one day, their son will return alive, than making them mourn you a few weeks after they have you back." The man said. He's the leader of an assassination organization, who sees potential in the boy and didn't want him to be wasted in the hand of those who wanted to kill him. "My family will be sad. They won't know that I'm alive." He said in a low tone, giving up the will to return home. He didn't want harm to come to his brother. "Let's talk to them. Let's make them realize that you wish to stay and will one day return." The man said and it worked. Nathan nodded his head. And that's how his journey as an assassin began. ***** "Look after my daughter. She likes you and you know it. If you don't feel the same, keep making it clear to her that you only see her as your sister. She will kill for you and will be your shadow. Lead the organization well." That was the last word from the man that raised him. The so called daughter, oh she's one stubborn girl. She's not planning to back down from her feelings. ....... "You can leave now. Tell him to send the girl in." Nathan casually said. They just deal with some idiots that tried to prove they are smart, but got drugged in the process. He didn't allow her take any drink, so she's fine, but knowing that he needed to relieve himself and she's here with him. Yet, another woman would come in, she summoned the courage. She knew he would have her neck for this boldness, but she wanted him. She had always do. "Take me instead." She said and before he could flash her a glare, she sealed his lips with her own. And that's when his feelings started to waver.

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TioLu
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when i read 'but with a much more complicated world that in the cannon', i dropped this novel without think.... some days later I ventured to read this novel... and was the best think than i did.... i recommended 1 thousand per cent.... this fanfic is awesome.... I already read many fanfics out there ... and this in my top ten!!!!

Cocoa
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I really like this story. You put a nice spin to the HP world. I hope you wont drop it. Will wait for the mext chapter :) . . . . . . . . . . Danm u 140 chara

JBrandt
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I truly love your story! I like what you did and can't wait for the next chapter! (Kidding... I can wait, it will just hurt inside) Keep up the great work :D

AmberPatriarch
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Love this story probably one of my favorite fanfictions on this website the characters are memorable and the darker aspects are very entertaining to read. Thank you for writing this story

Daoistsvab
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Good harry potter fan-fic beter than the ones i read before i realy like this nover . the more i read the more i like it keep up the good work. and one more thing will the twins go to hogwards. ....and when is next uptate

Mercury
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Adearic
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Good HP story .

Hetiii
HetiiiLv11Hetiii

Holy **** dude. I can't even read this **** get a proofreader or at least use grammarly. ........ ........ . . . . .

DarkTezza
DarkTezzaLv12DarkTezza

Intersting premise, but just unreadable... please get a proofreader or use gramarly... and use proper "QUOTATION" marks for speach.. .................................................................................................,.,,. .............................................,gggggggggggggggggggggggggggvvgggggggggggggggggggggggggggvv gggggggggggggggggggggggggggvvgggggggggggggggggggggggggggvv

Nitrox2
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What can i say, first i'm not an english native-speaker (i'm french). I tried to read, really, but it's impossible to not cringe when there is not a single paragraph without grammatical error (it's like i'm reading MTL, no kidding). If i were you, i would rewrite from the start this story (when i lack inspiration for exemple). It will help you see your error and you will progress i believe. Good luck

LTbutterfly287
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World design is another persons world so zero real effort. But this whole story is revolving around how much the author doesn’t like dumbledore. Maybe that’s not entirely true but it’s a big part of it. So the author doesn’t actually know how much of anything in Harry Potter works. Mc amazes 10 trillion dollars in a few years through investments and I think he made touch screen devices early but 10 trillion is impossible. Now the author seems to think that harry suffering from some abuse as a kid would humble the kid but it would rather make him similar to Voldemort. The author seems to think that dumbledore was planning Harry’s death since day one. Which is false, now the author also seems to think you can make a wand a sword as well which might I say is impossible. Why because the most important component of a wand is the wood. Also a sword could never get the proper hand movements out. He also seems to think goblins can make legendary swords still which they can’t. So he basis of the story is that the angel of a mc comes and aids harry and becomes his brother in all but blood. The angelic mc will save harry from the schemes of the evil old dumbledore. It’s not a bad story but the author has obviously taken modifying the plot to a new extreme.

jesusguero25
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Im just wondering. This novel hasn't updated in 2 mnths now. So... Is it dropped? Or are the releases just really slow. Hopefully its the releases. So author if you could reply it would be very appreciated.

F1nal
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Absolutly great besides the lack of chapters! i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thecrazy14
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Not a bad read a few miss spellings but not a bad story so far. hope you will keep it up and develop the story to the end and not give up half way.

Ley
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BankroMist
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I like your story, it's not the best but it's entertaining, it really changes the world concept of HP the protagonist if he uses the brain and his wealth to solve the problems that arise

dadaoist
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Not enough chapter to review, but I like the promise, so take my stars ! ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________

Arina_Manasikana_7835
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Saya tidak bisa menunggu lagi. Ini ff yg sangat bagus. Tp untuk menghormati author atau penulis, saya akan selalu setia menunggu. Saya harap ff ini segera dilanjutkan lagi. Menurut saya, ff ini termasuk salah satu ff yang menarik dari sekian banyak ff yang saya baca.

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