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Reborn as a fallen angel in DXD

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Lisez le roman Reborn as a fallen angel in DXD écrit par l'auteur Grim_Reaper_4508 publié sur WebNovel. A 16year old boy is sent tto the world of DXD as a fallen angel with 2 wishes join him on his quest to become the strongest or lazy aroundPs bad grammar...

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A 16year old boy is sent tto the world of DXD as a fallen angel with 2 wishes join him on his quest to become the strongest or lazy around Ps bad grammar

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PanKeRio
PanKeRioLv5PanKeRio

I honestly cannot recommend this There is nothing to speak off character is bland boring just plain and Simple I dont know what writer wanted to do bit it came out as mix of everything and it doesnt make any sense whatsoever writing quality is really bad so bad that i cannot understand what is written or what was intended most of Time There is nothing about The World and you need preknowledge to understand anything for now i havent seen this writer create anything that wasnt based on something before characters not described as they should be nothing on them when it matter really not The worst ive read but at The same Time way below what i Could consider "barely passable if your borednout od your mind and have nothing at all you can do other than this"

dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4dozkiller07

just want to say. don't use reborn if u r transmigrated to a 10 year old body. reborn must begin from start as a baby........................

righteousOne
righteousOneLv2righteousOne

Grammar suck, character development is bad and his personality is so-so. Long paragraph adding it with bad grammar, mix dialogue and thought, make your eyes hurt. Personality is sucked I don't know what to say but I don't like his personality. Hating being a slave because of losing his humanity but he wished a demon bloodline what kind of hypocrite is that. Anyway, there's more but I dropped this in chapter2, so it's up to you to read this.

yulrir
yulrirLv13yulrir

awful writing. the mistakes are all over that place. this also has bad character design, he's half human-half fallen angel yet has meliodas' bloodline(a demon). the god/rob over reacted and became angry because mc wished for meliodas' full counter, not including estarossa's full counter...

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10Ototsu_Yume

The novel's title is a straight up lie: He's not reborn as a fallen angel at all, he would have been if he didn't straight up wish for Meliodas' bloodline before even reincarnating (transmigrating) which not only fused and altered the 'fallen angel half' of his bloodline, it even removed him fron heaven's system before being born. (Novel should be called: "Generic Young Master in DxD with nerfed Meliodas' powers") It's an abhorrent mess, the wishes are pretty weak (the dude spends two wishes on Meliodas' bloodline and his version of fullcounter and gets threatened by the ROB to have his soul destroyed due to them being 'op' despite completely nerfing and altering them, Divine Dividing and Boost would be better than what he's left with here.) He wakes up (not as a baby so reincarnation is already iffy here as it's more like transmigration) in a bed with no memories and starts shouting and talking down to the first person he sees (A very polite maid, possibly Grayfia though as I couldn't stomach this trainwreck any further I never found out her name) He acts like a typical xianxia young master that gets murdered every chapter. (Here's an example of mc's 'personality' when interacting with people: "oi maid I'm done so bring me to a bathroom that has a mirror") On the bright side the author is pretty good at having his mc elicit emotions from the readers, as I for one whenever reading any line that the mc says get the urge to punch someone.

Gilgamesh_8387
Gilgamesh_8387Lv1Gilgamesh_8387

MC changes his character so many times, he is quick-tempered, sometimes irritable, sometimes soft, sometimes domineering, sometimes tough and it is very annoying. Besides, there are all clichés and a lot of stupid moments.

Bierbart
BierbartLv14Bierbart

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Alaric_9000
Alaric_9000Lv13Alaric_9000

This seems to be a solid story story so far. The thing that keeps it down is the grammar and writing quality. I would recommend that the Author get a beta to look over the story to proof read and correct mistakes.

Demonilusion
DemonilusionLv1Demonilusion

grayfia is she not Lucifer's wife? I don't understand how she is a maid who helps him I was a little confused why then she showed up with Lucifer

ThatsClassified
ThatsClassifiedLv11ThatsClassified

il summarize, mg has little man syndrome, author is partially illiterate and doesn't know how to structure a sentence, characters are so bland it's just noticable, mc has nerfed meliodas powers , has the cringe troubled past background cuz of the author's Naruto fetish and it's just straight up boring

Krishnbarad
KrishnbaradLv4Krishnbarad

hmm...this is interesting I will be honest the plot is good and executions is also well done,grammar is sometimes off but nothing major that couldn't be handled now the best thing would be its humor and a touch of romance which makes I quite exotic well ready it yourself nothing much to say

Lazy_Fox111
Lazy_Fox111Lv4Lazy_Fox111

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Virtuosso
VirtuossoLv14Virtuosso

Just pathetic and a wimp mc, writing quality is like 4th grader and story basically sucks. Logic is thrown away and plotholes are everywhere. Thanks for wasting my time 😒

UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitorLv13UndeadProgenitor

The MC is quite annoying to read about. He is self-contradictory, rude,and cringy. It’s overall a bad combo for a personality. 눈_눈 …………….

DaoisteRNqtp
DaoisteRNqtpLv1DaoisteRNqtp

Неплохой фанфик.Мне понравился,а граматику можно потерпеть если история интересная.С нетерпением жду продолжения.Большое спасибо автору за него и вдохновения ему!

Talal77
Talal77Lv3Talal77

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TwistedUExile
TwistedUExileLv14TwistedUExile

It story good so far but need better organization when comes to the writing. The main character is not a simp which I like and personality is really intriguing.

Elijah_Martin_9780
Elijah_Martin_9780Lv13Elijah_Martin_9780

Booty………. ………………………………………………………………………

Simon1234
Simon1234Lv4Simon1234

it could be way more better in my opinion

Ace_DragonHeart
Ace_DragonHeartLv3Ace_DragonHeart

Its not the best, but it isn't terrible either. I have found that post being re-written it has improved in where I previously found it to be bland.

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