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Overlord: Ancient one

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What is Overlord: Ancient one

Lisez le roman Overlord: Ancient one écrit par l'auteur Clockwork_055 publié sur WebNovel. I welcome you homies, Who searching for a Fan-fic to calm your nerves. Then you stumped upon the right place to relax. This is your typical story where MC is reincarnated in the overlord world and is ...

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I welcome you homies, Who searching for a Fan-fic to calm your nerves. Then you stumped upon the right place to relax. This is your typical story where MC is reincarnated in the overlord world and is transported to the new world (like in canon). but due to a dimensional outbreak, the world is restarted once again (like the DXD world). I know this is confusing but be patient and the story will be at a slow pace. There will be a harem. well MC is transported to DXD world so harem is a must. Smut:That is obvious, but smut only starts after MC arrives at the new world. MC is OP, this is also an overlord fanfiction so what do you expect? NOTE: None of the characters in this fanfiction is mine. expect the OC. And for my hard work—do some charity by giving your pitiful Power stone, doing so you not only support me but you are also giving me the inspiration to continue writing this Fan-fic. For misers who refused to do some charity—For them, I have nothing to say. ~~~ First time writing guys, so don't expect too much from me but I will improve my writing as the chapter increases. I also did take some ideas from some fanfiction, hope you will enjoy it. Have a good day. Thank you. ~~~ I posted 15+ advanced chapters along with its NSFW on Patreon, If you want to support me, check it out. You only need 3$ to become my Patreon. Support me in Patreon: patreon.com/Clockwork439 ~~~

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EvilBlueCrystal
EvilBlueCrystalLv1EvilBlueCrystal

It has potential if you change it, right now it's average You can improve it by Remove first chapter, it's so bad Remove filler or too much info dump Remove wishes or system, give his a telent, bloodline ability or skill If you want him to have tensura skill then say he died in tensura and reincarned in overlord Raphael skill is too op, just give him 3rd rank analysis skill or apraisal skill Don't make it into mmo game simple reincarnation Make the story simple, believable, logical It's not shown where the location is The leveling part is boring, the system is not explained enough His goals for leveling or objective is not clear The time skip seems very random, why bother having him level up just to skip and make him fight the strongest monster? And he kill the death knight easily, how? How the character looks Make him smart Include other characters Explain his character background, past, goals... The paragraphs are too big, split them Fix grammar Don't include emoojis

Random_Omnipotent
Random_OmnipotentLv4Random_Omnipotent

It's pretty good so far specialty since the story is slow paced also i just wanna ask if there's gonna be a second reincarnated person in the story i just wanna ask since i don't want to be disappointed like the other fanfic that I've read , if there is an another reincarnated person i'mma be this guy in the picture, one reader ain't much to lose but i still want to announced it

Pilotfranco
PilotfrancoLv12Pilotfranco

Look bruh, the story isn’t bad if you don’t understand overlord lore but if you do this story sucks, there is so much wrong with it that it sucks. Besides that the mc is so one dimensional with no depth. Along with that the way the story is progressing is atrocious. read if you want but it’s no for me, bless up fool

Clockwork_055
Clockwork_055AuteurClockwork_055

As a shameless person l let myself be honoured to give a 5-star rating to my fanfiction.

DisastrousPride
DisastrousPrideLv4DisastrousPride

This is the longest prologue I have ever seen ,32 and still counting.send him to the new world already no one cares about the game

DefeatedNinth_LRNS
DefeatedNinth_LRNSLv13DefeatedNinth_LRNS

hmm... Let's go! incredible potential 5x☆ A very engaging and enjoyable development, nothing too aggressive or overly passive. interaction to the original world and AU in a wonderful way! development... so far I just fell in love with the MC type and the way the story is directed, without dumping information, but very clear at the same time. again immense potential and I look forward to the future of this new world / perspective / life. who can tell me and build. (☆☆☆☆☆)<Stars, for your work so far. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Dog_That_Eat_Flame
Dog_That_Eat_FlameLv5Dog_That_Eat_Flame

If you find this Fanfic good, then I have a better recommendation for you guys. Try reading Overlord: The Origin. It a fanfic that where most of the idea of this fanfic came from. My author guy here butchered some parts of it and pasted it here, things like fight, loots, and even events are got copied from it.

Sir_Squirrel
Sir_SquirrelLv4Sir_Squirrel

honestly, this has the potential to be a great read, but I just couldn't bring myself to read further with how many writing errors there are in almost every other paragraph, the writing quality is just not this fic's strong point, not the worst mind you, it is still readable, and am sure after a while of writing the author will eventually improve but right now I just can't enjoy this. best of luck

Lizrock
LizrockLv4Lizrock

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TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2TruthHurtsX1000

Idk why rating is so high..ive seen alot of the lower ratings be deleted so that maybe why..not close to 5 stars..its 4 months and its 30 chapters only. Chapters only 1 k if that. A lot of details get left out because it be so bad to have more than 1k words lool. Its q ok story but you read ot and forget it just as quickly.

Sergio_Navarrete
Sergio_NavarreteLv2Sergio_Navarrete

Good start. Keep it up author!

NyxOuroboros
NyxOuroborosLv11NyxOuroboros

I, who read the Overlord LN, find this fic disgusting. Although the main idea is good, I suggest deleting this completely, reading the Overlord and DxD LN, and then creating something readable.

VoidReader8577
VoidReader8577Lv4VoidReader8577

From the looks of it, the author does not read reviews but I am going to put mine here anyways. Frankly, I enjoyed the story but there are a few problems that I have with it. As for the writing quality it was ok. There were a few grammar mistakes and it felt really drawn out at some points. I am giving update stability a 1 because it is SLOW!! I mean it has been 5 months since the first chapter and we have only just now gotten to the New World. The author plans to take this story to DXD at some point but with the current updates, that will literally take close to a year. That is ridiculous and I think if the author wants more support and traction for this story then he needs to update it more frequently. I am giving the story development a 4 because I like the direction that it is going. Again however is it is really slow and that does not pair well with the infrequent updates. Character design is a 3 because the author was "inspired" by a few other fan fictions World Background is a 5 because the world was really fleshed out. Overall, the story is decent. However the author needs to update the story more often because the short chapters plus infrequent updates do not make for a good combination.

Josh_Richie
Josh_RichieLv13Josh_Richie

I honestly don't see why the MC still had to follow the original protagonist. As a fanfic, couldn't he have created his own guild? plus, he has the ability to create avatars.

Sleepy_Gamer
Sleepy_GamerLv1Sleepy_Gamer

This is just a reskinned Chaotic Good... some of these chapters are the exact same but with Arthur you didnt even change the In Game Name. The Caloric Stone was like 90% the same so none of this is original

OneshotMaco
OneshotMacoLv4OneshotMaco

I will say that I enjoyed reading this and can't wait for more chapters. And for the people who said that it doesn't match that well with Overlord lore, it doesn't matter. The Overlord starts when he gets transported to the new world not in the game. Though we see the game as a flashback every now and then the acutual storyline starts in the new world. So in my opinion the story can be anything before the new world.

LastGod
LastGodLv4LastGod

This is just a dude playing a video game in fanfiction form. I mean, I lost interest in it so fast. I could be doing this instead of reading about it.

Jorah26252
Jorah26252Lv4Jorah26252

Just another overlord novel with a psychotic evil mc that gains power and forgets his morals.

wisdomseeker
wisdomseekerLv14wisdomseeker

Nice fanfic ,not too fast paced not too slow either

HereForGoodRead
HereForGoodReadLv4HereForGoodRead

Need more chapters I also gave you a total for 4 power stones so hand it over

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