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Random_Omnipotent
Random_OmnipotentLv41yr
2023-04-07 19:22

It's pretty good so far specialty since the story is slow paced also i just wanna ask if there's gonna be a second reincarnated person in the story i just wanna ask since i don't want to be disappointed like the other fanfic that I've read , if there is an another reincarnated person i'mma be this guy in the picture, one reader ain't much to lose but i still want to announced it

Overlord: Ancient one

Clockwork_055
4.2
116 Chs

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Clockwork_055
Clockwork_055Author

No, there will be only mc as a reincarnated person.

1yr
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Random_Omnipotent
Random_OmnipotentLv4

thank god it won't be like Overlord: the origin

Clockwork_055:No, there will be only mc as a reincarnated person.
1yr
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N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2

Overlord the origin started good ( If I remember well) but then he used a lot of shtty worlds as the story went by so now only the fans of those low grade animes are still reading.

Random_Omnipotent:thank god it won't be like Overlord: the origin
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1yr
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Fuckyall
FuckyallLv14

This look good but please let Momonga transfer to dxd world too. If not it will just become boring

1yr
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THE_EVIL_IMMORTAL
THE_EVIL_IMMORTALLv15

btw I never read that one

N0_Hope:Overlord the origin started good ( If I remember well) but then he used a lot of shtty worlds as the story went by so now only the fans of those low grade animes are still reading.
1yr
3
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Hello. i would want to know something about this story. Will Momonga be part of this story.? Will DXD female characters be part of his Harem.? If socan i request Sona Sitri.? And who will be in his Harem.? and how many chapters in week will be updated.?.And do not NTR Sichehs, Rias brother he .and Grafiya love each other very much. And no NTR please i hate it

Clockwork_055:No, there will be only mc as a reincarnated person.
1yr
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Clockwork_055
Clockwork_055Author

Momonga will not be part of the story, and the chapter will be updated every Monday and yes there will be Sona as Harem member.

Dark_PersonJJ:Hello. i would want to know something about this story. Will Momonga be part of this story.? Will DXD female characters be part of his Harem.? If socan i request Sona Sitri.? And who will be in his Harem.? and how many chapters in week will be updated.?.And do not NTR Sichehs, Rias brother he .and Grafiya love each other very much. And no NTR please i hate it
1yr
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Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Thats great thank you. So MC will take Momonga place as a ruler and Overlordyes he will be the only one from our world who will cross to New World.And when it comes to New World Female characters i think, Albedo, Shalltear, Evil Eye and Zenshi should be good enough.

Clockwork_055:Momonga will not be part of the story, and the chapter will be updated every Monday and yes there will be Sona as Harem member.
1yr
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DaoistmXBnrL
DaoistmXBnrLLv4

will you add them in the harem?

Clockwork_055:Momonga will not be part of the story, and the chapter will be updated every Monday and yes there will be Sona as Harem member.
1yr
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Clockwork_055
Clockwork_055Author

Oi, is that something you need to ask, they will be in harem.

DaoistmXBnrL:will you add them in the harem?
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1yr
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wolfgod223
wolfgod223Lv14

Is he evil???

Clockwork_055:Oi, is that something you need to ask, they will be in harem.
11mth
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

How large is the harem?

Clockwork_055:No, there will be only mc as a reincarnated person.
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MarinXGrayfia
MarinXGrayfiaLv4

stop reading at chap 49/9 month ago and all i see 50+ chap added. what a disappointment

2mth
Random_Omnipotent
Random_OmnipotentLv4

haha i remove this one in my library after a few months of No update, i just remember this FanFiction because of your comment 😅

MarinXGrayfia:stop reading at chap 49/9 month ago and all i see 50+ chap added. what a disappointment
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Other Reviews
Pilotfranco
PilotfrancoLv13

Look bruh, the story isn’t bad if you don’t understand overlord lore but if you do this story sucks, there is so much wrong with it that it sucks. Besides that the mc is so one dimensional with no depth. Along with that the way the story is progressing is atrocious. read if you want but it’s no for me, bless up fool

1yr

DisastrousPride
DisastrousPrideLv4

This is the longest prologue I have ever seen ,32 and still counting.send him to the new world already no one cares about the game

1yr
Clockwork_055
Clockwork_055Author

As a shameless person l let myself be honoured to give a 5-star rating to my fanfiction.

1yr
DefeatedNinth_LRNS
DefeatedNinth_LRNSLv13

hmm... Let's go! incredible potential 5x☆ A very engaging and enjoyable development, nothing too aggressive or overly passive. interaction to the original world and AU in a wonderful way! development... so far I just fell in love with the MC type and the way the story is directed, without dumping information, but very clear at the same time. again immense potential and I look forward to the future of this new world / perspective / life. who can tell me and build. (☆☆☆☆☆)<Stars, for your work so far. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
Dog_That_Eat_Flame
Dog_That_Eat_FlameLv5

If you find this Fanfic good, then I have a better recommendation for you guys. Try reading Overlord: The Origin. It a fanfic that where most of the idea of this fanfic came from. My author guy here butchered some parts of it and pasted it here, things like fight, loots, and even events are got copied from it.

1yr
TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2

Idk why rating is so high..ive seen alot of the lower ratings be deleted so that maybe why..not close to 5 stars..its 4 months and its 30 chapters only. Chapters only 1 k if that. A lot of details get left out because it be so bad to have more than 1k words lool. Its q ok story but you read ot and forget it just as quickly.

1yr
Sir_Squirrle
Sir_SquirrleLv4

honestly, this has the potential to be a great read, but I just couldn't bring myself to read further with how many writing errors there are in almost every other paragraph, the writing quality is just not this fic's strong point, not the worst mind you, it is still readable, and am sure after a while of writing the author will eventually improve but right now I just can't enjoy this. best of luck

1yr
Lizrock
LizrockLv4

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1yr
NyxOuroboros
NyxOuroborosLv11

I, who read the Overlord LN, find this fic disgusting. Although the main idea is good, I suggest deleting this completely, reading the Overlord and DxD LN, and then creating something readable.

1yr
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