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DefeatedNinth_LRNS
DefeatedNinth_LRNSLv131yr
2023-07-17 13:57

hmm... Let's go! incredible potential 5x☆ A very engaging and enjoyable development, nothing too aggressive or overly passive. interaction to the original world and AU in a wonderful way! development... so far I just fell in love with the MC type and the way the story is directed, without dumping information, but very clear at the same time. again immense potential and I look forward to the future of this new world / perspective / life. who can tell me and build. (☆☆☆☆☆)<Stars, for your work so far. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Overlord: Ancient one

Clockwork_055
4.2
117 Chs

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Random_Omnipotent
Random_OmnipotentLv4

It's pretty good so far specialty since the story is slow paced also i just wanna ask if there's gonna be a second reincarnated person in the story i just wanna ask since i don't want to be disappointed like the other fanfic that I've read , if there is an another reincarnated person i'mma be this guy in the picture, one reader ain't much to lose but i still want to announced it

1yr

DisastrousPride
DisastrousPrideLv4

This is the longest prologue I have ever seen ,32 and still counting.send him to the new world already no one cares about the game

1yr
Pilotfranco
PilotfrancoLv13

Look bruh, the story isn’t bad if you don’t understand overlord lore but if you do this story sucks, there is so much wrong with it that it sucks. Besides that the mc is so one dimensional with no depth. Along with that the way the story is progressing is atrocious. read if you want but it’s no for me, bless up fool

1yr
Clockwork_055
Clockwork_055Author

As a shameless person l let myself be honoured to give a 5-star rating to my fanfiction.

1yr
Dog_That_Eat_Flame
Dog_That_Eat_FlameLv5

If you find this Fanfic good, then I have a better recommendation for you guys. Try reading Overlord: The Origin. It a fanfic that where most of the idea of this fanfic came from. My author guy here butchered some parts of it and pasted it here, things like fight, loots, and even events are got copied from it.

1yr
TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2

Idk why rating is so high..ive seen alot of the lower ratings be deleted so that maybe why..not close to 5 stars..its 4 months and its 30 chapters only. Chapters only 1 k if that. A lot of details get left out because it be so bad to have more than 1k words lool. Its q ok story but you read ot and forget it just as quickly.

1yr
Sir_Squirrle
Sir_SquirrleLv4

honestly, this has the potential to be a great read, but I just couldn't bring myself to read further with how many writing errors there are in almost every other paragraph, the writing quality is just not this fic's strong point, not the worst mind you, it is still readable, and am sure after a while of writing the author will eventually improve but right now I just can't enjoy this. best of luck

1yr
Lizrock
LizrockLv4

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1yr
NyxOuroboros
NyxOuroborosLv11

I, who read the Overlord LN, find this fic disgusting. Although the main idea is good, I suggest deleting this completely, reading the Overlord and DxD LN, and then creating something readable.

1yr
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