Hey there! Shameless Author Review, let's go!
A year ago, I wrote this story, but I felt like it needed some changes, so I made a rewrite. This rewrite follows the original, but its better in my opinion, so I will be saying what I think is better.
First off, I think the writing. I remember my descriptions being childish last time I wrote, seeing as how it was my first time writing. I don't think that fact has changed much, but I believe there is a visible difference. I'm not that good when it comes to the writing aspect, although the ideas are in my head, bringing them out into words is a bit tough! But I believe its better than before.
Next, I can promise that I'll be updating everyday. As has been observed by readers, I haven't failed to update even a single day. Going so far to bring up Power stone challenges and bringing those 5 chapters out, not even taking them as a part of my weekly schedule! I promise a minimum of 5 chapters a week, so you won't be bored a single day!
Also, the story development! This part some might find annoying since its in my opinion, a BIG story! It starts of with a feeling of mystery and there being more than what everything seems, but those won't be focused on, since they only blur out the current happenings. I believe that the story is very slow paced, but this aspect will be picking up the pace with each arc. Slowly, but surely, you will notice certain events happening quicker and quicker and before you realise, the pace will be too fast to keep up with. Until then, I hope you enjoy the arcs in between them!
Then there's the diverse cast. Or what I hope to be diverse. The monsters are very cliche, same common traits, looks and stereotypes. A few unconventional creatures, but not a lot, all with their own traditions, cultures, characters, attitudes and perceptions on life. I hope they blend colourfully to enthrall you readers!
I spent a while thinking about the world (A year) and to be honest, after a bit of chipping and cutting out chaff, it is quite a small one, compared to what i was envisioning at first. It takes place in a small continent in a completely random world that has been altered by the actions of "gods". The land is divided into a few zones, with different races, and other twists and turns, lore and history and the other good stuff I won't be mentioning now.
This is it for my review at the end of the 2nd Arc, Chapter 40 something (lol, Idk)
In short, enjoy!
