Hey author here, several things have happened between them that I realized that the story did not have a very good beginning, especially because I realized that many people did not like that the MC was an adult since he seemed pedophile.
From what I have rewritten, you do not have to worry because the story is almost the same, so you do not have to reread everything, the only thing I recommend rereading is the prologue and chapter 1, so you will understand the story better.
The rest of the chapters remain practically the same.
Read it and tell me if you think it's better this way.
Thank you for your attention and continued support, I am very grateful to you.
The chapters that I re-uploaded will appear with an 'edited' in their title.
See you tomorrow with the next chapter
Thank you very much for reading my fanfic, I hope you enjoy it and if you like it I hope you support me with a power stone.
If you want to read advanced chapters you can go to my pa *** / acoms
Without more to say, I hope you enjoy reading my story.