Marakyuu Madness

This is utterly disgusting with n t r and a heroine isn't a heroine when she is a who re no matter how much of a bi tc h they are. Are you representating heroine in the splitting image of your mother who is who re too? Like f off disgusting trash you should post this on scri bble hub and royal road where there are many like you disgusting Lowlife

Plot with 'Plot' is the best kind. The fic is written nicely too and our MC isn't a typical murder hobo, rias basher or is the typical special snowflake that would otherwise plague the fandom. The story is about a man with a goal... a goal that seems to be impeded by the girls getting in his way. As these woman seem to insert themselves into his life as he tries to keep his coffee shop a float XD.

Women use the main character through money. No progression in the story. He has no girlfriend. Everyone he had intercourse with had already been used by other man before. ------------------------------------------------------------- We know that the author likes ntr so netorare and betrayal can occur later ------------------------------------------------------------- .I should report them in advance!

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So far so good. keep it up author!

A useless piece of trash ff among many ff on webnovel with a braindead mc and thoets around him and an alive issei and his harem................

Good fic, love the premise and the development. It could do with more updates, but personally I don't mind waiting on them if their ones of this much quality.

an alive and kicking issei in rias's peerage and ntr vibes is all you need to know to rate this sheet

It's honestly a great read, you should try it out! - - As a side note, all the NTR people are complaining about is the MC (whom works as a male escort) sleeping with some women who are married. I can understand that it's a little off-putting, but they hired the MC - if he declined, not only would he be hurting his reputation and not getting what he would have been paid, but the women would simply hire someone else. Besides, this isn't even a small part of the fanfic - it's hardly mentioned more than a couple times.

This is so good just need more chapters..............................................................................................................

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i dont even read the story, but reading the review.. man i already got a bad vibes from this one.. same thing happen when i read that "live with author" by emanuelcuck or something, whatever lol

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Soy el señor de la guerra Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka y hablo con la palabra de loz diozez. ¡Soy el profeta del WAAAGH! y mundos enteroz arderán en las huellas de mis botas «. – Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka

I love your fic! Are you going to come back any time soon?

good

Great story so far!!! Plot with 'plot' is awesome. The author is a man of culture [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

author-chan,please do update this soon. I will be waiting like hachiko^⁠_⁠^

I like it, keep the good work. The people who cant write, why they dislike fancic, is stoopid. I like your work, so yeah. English not main language, so jist write that i like it/

La calidad de escritura nadie te la niega, la estabilidad de actualización se queda un poco corta el desarrollo tiene un punto de vista único debido a que mc trabaja de ya sabes, el diseño del personaje se quedará bastante corto a menos que saques algo más adelante pero es bastante único entre los fics pero no a todos les gusta y el fondo del mundo está bastante bien desarrollado tomando varios puntos de vista y siguiendo la línea de tiempo original