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Lucifer's Descendant System

Auteur: Zhanye
Fantaisie
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  • 4.5
    524 audimat
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Synopsis

At some point in the 21st century, the Christian God stopped listening to the prayers of humanity. Monsters with colossal strength and endurance began to emerge and humanity entered its darkest period. However, to the delight of humanity, some people around the world began to receive powers, and so humanity was able to fight back against monsters, now seeing these people with powers as the heroes who fought for the good of the world. Among these people was Noah, who even though he gained powers, he knew that those powers did not make him stronger at all, making him just as strong as a normal adult man. However, an unknown system awakens and declares him to be the descendant of Lucifer, completely changing his life to the path of the truth and true power. [2 Daily chapters + Extra releases] Lucifer | Descensant | System

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Volume 1
Volume 2 :Way to Hell

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puukkiss
puukkissLv3

Due to the dumbing-down of everyone to make MC intelligent, MC is basically a king of Monkeys. His smartness is... reading beforehand about the dungeon - something almost no one seems to do. His cleverness is... not being cocky. As typical in superpower stories, my power is rank [insert higher than lowest], therefore I'll be cocky as eff, and I'll march into unknown dangers thinking everyone is beneath me. And then regret it and MC will come in to save the day. His cleverness is not shown in battle, using tricks, imagination, clever tactics. He fights with a knife pointed forward and later with a flame pointed forward. Okay, he uses the most basic game tactic of the boss weak point... the monster's mouth... no one would have figured out that the monster's weak point is its mouth/sarcasm And of course, the only woman who has more than one line about her wants to get into MC pants after she finds out how great he really is. Quote from a chapter: "Wendy, who at that moment was trying to stop the bite wound of the girl who had flattered Harry, couldn't stop spying in Noah's direction. "He... That flame of his does a lot of damage to the boss; he's definitely not just a blessed Rank F... Damn Amy, if you hadn't..." Yes, as the battle goes on, as they may die, as she heals her best friend's torn open bloody wound, she laments that her friend prevented previously her from flirting with the MC before. This BTW was mentioned a few times before, this particular scene just further highlighted how braindead it sounds. As for Lucifer... Right now it's just being used as a fancy edgy name. No symbolism or deeper thinking found so far. After all, only humans can sin, but for some reason burning random rats works. I'd liked to see a restriction on the power that only sinful human burning can upgrade the skill. That would give the upgrade a more monumental feel. Now it feels like he gets double exp. Kill first, then burn. Nothing fun at all. The Vampire system at least tackles it with needing different humans and second fang dips didn't count. This story's MC can farm all the "sinful" (how are they sinful??) rats. As it is now, this novel is a barebone basic system/powers/dungeon novel. The characters are cardboard cutouts. The powers are basic and uninteresting. Most shown are the story basic cookies cutouts Fire, Ice, and Healing. And they are used by pointing hands and shooting... They aren't described interestingly.

smoker
smokerLv1

Real review Writing quality is good. There are plenty of mistakes but nothing too serious usually so it doesnt put you off. Its not good enough tho so 3 stars. Stability of updates is the biggest problem. Not only did the author disappear for like a month after posting one chapter at the start of the previous month to make people buy privilege (keep in mind that he had also disappeared at the last half of February but he returned to post that one chapter) but he also returned only 5 days before this month was over wasting everyone who paid for privilege. And as if that wasnt enough instead of making it up to the readers for how badly he ****ed everyone who paid for privilege last month he simply said **** it and created an even more expensive priv tier that costs 30 dollars. Now if it was worth it and the author wasnt acting dishonestly the privi would probably be worth it but its not and its all because of the next part the story development. In all honesty this deserved 2 stars but nonetheless I gave it 3 stars because of the earlier chapters. The premise was original but apparently the author either got lazy or lost all his creativity while writing, repeating things over and over, repeating system screen and stats to fill the word count at the same time. The earlier chapters were definitely good tho which is why I gave this 3 stars instead of 2 which it honestly deserves after chapter 180. World Background: Honestly this is the only good part which is what I gave 4 stars. Although it feels like a rip off of Solo Leveling done worse and there are huge inconsistencies in the story (read and you will find out) it was still interesting enough to give 4 stars. Overall, I would say that the story had a lot of potential and I am not against the authors making money from priv considering that webnovel probably doesnt pay them shit but you need to make the money spent worth it. Updating at the start of the month for people to buy your expensive privilege while disappearing is dishonest and EVERYONE who spent money for priv last month felt scammed and not worth it

MarcGem
MarcGemLv13

This book is rated too highly for its content. Well, I know the high reviews are attributed to the book not being premium and the low number of reviews itself. But I usually rate books by their writing quality, setting, plot and characters and not by updating stability, being premium or whatever. Solely based on its content, as I compare it to other works, it would be a 4.3 on webnovel, maybe a 3.9 on novelupdates for the 50 chapters I've read. Writing quality is alright at best. Grammar mistakes are prevalent like in every other webnovel except for an elite few. Spelling is good, but punctuation and word choice is terrible. Throughout the story, many words are redundant and repeating. Because of the subpar writing quality, the story doesn't flow that well. Story development is cliche... family problems, sick sibling, and an evil, greedy uncle ... you know it. MC got an overpowered system and will slap their faces in due time and save his family from debt yada yada. This plot is just overused. Basically, the only difference is the system and world background. One other thing... logical errors! Some things just don't make sense! Character design also ... bland as ever, but not as bland as other novels. Main character is honestly a dumbass, one large decision he made is absolutely retarded (he could get out of his predicament easily but chooses not to because of pride) Others are logical and i can follow his thinking... Antagonists are blockheads at best, side characters don't have colour to them... Lastly, world background, which is somewhat unique. Alright, even though it's similar to solo levelling's dungeons but called fortresses here, and similar to the thousands of other system novels and apocalyptic novels, it's somewhat unique in the sense that it's a mix of all of them. And that's... what I'm here for, because I'm a sucker for each one of these genre, not to mention having all of them in this novel

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