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puukkiss
puukkissLv33yr
2021-01-17 23:26

Due to the dumbing-down of everyone to make MC intelligent, MC is basically a king of Monkeys. His smartness is... reading beforehand about the dungeon - something almost no one seems to do. His cleverness is... not being cocky. As typical in superpower stories, my power is rank [insert higher than lowest], therefore I'll be cocky as eff, and I'll march into unknown dangers thinking everyone is beneath me. And then regret it and MC will come in to save the day. His cleverness is not shown in battle, using tricks, imagination, clever tactics. He fights with a knife pointed forward and later with a flame pointed forward. Okay, he uses the most basic game tactic of the boss weak point... the monster's mouth... no one would have figured out that the monster's weak point is its mouth/sarcasm And of course, the only woman who has more than one line about her wants to get into MC pants after she finds out how great he really is. Quote from a chapter: "Wendy, who at that moment was trying to stop the bite wound of the girl who had flattered Harry, couldn't stop spying in Noah's direction. "He... That flame of his does a lot of damage to the boss; he's definitely not just a blessed Rank F... Damn Amy, if you hadn't..." Yes, as the battle goes on, as they may die, as she heals her best friend's torn open bloody wound, she laments that her friend prevented previously her from flirting with the MC before. This BTW was mentioned a few times before, this particular scene just further highlighted how braindead it sounds. As for Lucifer... Right now it's just being used as a fancy edgy name. No symbolism or deeper thinking found so far. After all, only humans can sin, but for some reason burning random rats works. I'd liked to see a restriction on the power that only sinful human burning can upgrade the skill. That would give the upgrade a more monumental feel. Now it feels like he gets double exp. Kill first, then burn. Nothing fun at all. The Vampire system at least tackles it with needing different humans and second fang dips didn't count. This story's MC can farm all the "sinful" (how are they sinful??) rats. As it is now, this novel is a barebone basic system/powers/dungeon novel. The characters are cardboard cutouts. The powers are basic and uninteresting. Most shown are the story basic cookies cutouts Fire, Ice, and Healing. And they are used by pointing hands and shooting... They aren't described interestingly.

Lucifer's Descendant System

Zhanye
4.5
407 Chs

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Phytrix
PhytrixLv11

This pretty much sums up how I felt about it , and also long expositions that nobody cares about.

3yr
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NikTitanik866
NikTitanik866Lv3

agreed

3yr
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Jailson_Delicia
Jailson_DeliciaLv1

The writer of this novel is a Brazilian youtuber called "Zy" who was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude photos with a minor girl who was one of his subscribers. She was about 15 years old.

3yr
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Pegeoti
PegeotiLv1

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 13.

3yr
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ZymorelikeIdiotZy
ZymorelikeIdiotZyLv1

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

3yr
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PolaRdo
PolaRdoLv1

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

3yr
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myamoto_musashu
myamoto_musashuLv1

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

3yr
Lucien121
Lucien121Lv15

fyi this has been going around several novels and also hey like if you ever wanted to make it believable how bout you not spam it

3yr
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Kayastor
KayastorLv11

god ikr why cant webnovel do anything about the bots I mean go look at the reviews of his older novels there was one where you can only find reviews of just the exact same review(saying hes zy)

Lucien121:fyi this has been going around several novels and also hey like if you ever wanted to make it believable how bout you not spam it
3yr
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Lucien121
Lucien121Lv15

its heavily annoying

Kayastor:god ikr why cant webnovel do anything about the bots I mean go look at the reviews of his older novels there was one where you can only find reviews of just the exact same review(saying hes zy)
3yr
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Psicho_Vascaino
Psicho_VascainoLv1

Fun Fact: the author is brazilian pedo.

3yr
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Battleblaze
BattleblazeLv3

This comment boys that dis credit author I have seen in another novel comments called jack of arts of something

3yr
Noothing_here
Noothing_hereLv1

LOL pare de contar mentiras eles podem acreditar

Jailson_Delicia:The writer of this novel is a Brazilian youtuber called "Zy" who was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude photos with a minor girl who was one of his subscribers. She was about 15 years old.
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M_Manibisasi
M_ManibisasiLv1

😐😂😂

Psicho_Vascaino:Fun Fact: the author is brazilian pedo.
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Quackk
QuackkLv10

I was surprised, I couldn't find any point to criticize in this story, the rhythm is good, perfect grammar, the author knows how to express well what is happening in the scene, besides always making me want to read more. POST MORE CHAPTERS FASTER

4yr

Kadish
KadishLv14

173 chapters read: Unlike most other books on this site, i dont really have anything to criticize. The spelling and grammar is good, pacing is great and the character dev is decent too. I have read his other novels before rhis one, and I enjoyed those too, but there is clear improvement with this novel. It is work the read IMHO.

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Zhanye
ZhanyeAuthor

Shameless review of the author! I was longing to write this lol, I'm back with my newest book and I count on your support just as you supported others! ♥

4yr
Lypros
LyprosLv4

Personality of the mc: almost non-existent. Logic of the story: according to the author's wishes. The very definition of a good concept badly realized

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ErectileReptile
ErectileReptileLv14

I've been reading this novel for a long time now so I'm able to give a genuine review for it. I'll be highlighting what's good and what's bad. Don't be a sour puss of you don't agree with me. 2/5 Writing Quality... The flow of words is jarring at times and the author's naming sense makes me want to vomit. I'm not exaggerating, it's like the author thinks of the most uncomfortable skill names and uses them on purpose for a joke. It just really takes away from the quality of the novel 4/5 Story Development... Good plot. Interesting world background. A lot of potential. Character Design 2/5... It's very unoriginal. Minimum effort put in in my opinion. 1/5 Update Stability... I'd actually give this a 0 if the rating system allowed it. The author often goes MIA as soon as he promises that he's permanently back. The chapters he then releases are barely 1000 words. He also has a very greedy habit of releasing chapters at the start of each month to make users buy privilege but then doesn't upload until the following month. It's even been mentioned in discord that he doesn't actually care for the novel and is just using it to make money. This only started in the last half year or so and it killed the novel for me. 3/5 World Background... Lot of potential. I also like the idea of a world hopping adventure. 2.4/5 Overall... A lot of potential that's sadly wasted by an incompetent and greedy author.

3yr
Lruska
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I am the exp of my Golden Fox, Bestial King. Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works!

4yr
Dao_of_Melancholy
Dao_of_MelancholyLv13

Good stuff lots of potential space for potential character development I’m invested in this one .................................................................

4yr
Jerin_Johnson
Jerin_JohnsonLv2

A novel that's clearly just a solo leveling rip off. Also the update stability is shockingly awful. The author just so happens to release some chapters at the beginning of each month. Just in time for his privelidge to update. Hella suspicious.

3yr
IceYmir
IceYmirLv10

I follow this author in all the stories he writes and he has never disappointed me, apparently the grammar in this story is several times better than in the other stories, so my hype is high for what is to come!

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