Atalyn_Navia
I don't know what to say about myself, I'm just an ordinary novel reader who only spends time reading various novels You can call me Navi or Atalyn, Nice to meet you
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I like it, and slow life stories like this are really the kind of stories I like, so my assessment of this fanfic is very positive. Although I hope the author updates again after 2 months with no news other than information about accidents and broken bones, and also it worries me that there is no news at all about the author recently. btw get well soon
I can say this is a good story, the stability in updating the chapters is also quite stable, I have read several chapters and it is good. but I also don't like how the author made mistakes in writing the character's names from the name of the main character, and the names of other characters whose writing does not match the character's real name. And also I can say that sometimes the character's name is written as a stereotypical Japanese name (I'm not sure if this is the right way to describe it) Overall this is a good story, and it would be even better if the author improved the way you wrote the characters' names.
It's good, I like it.
Thanks for the chapter, a little suggestions. Can you use the word kimono instead of using the word kemono for traditional Japanese clothing? Because kemono means animal and that was quite strange for me when I read it
Good novel, I liked it, especially using Lovecraftian themes. The use of words that I think are good and the neat writing makes me comfortable reading this. I wonder if the main character will have a direct connection to the outer gods, or just be a worshiper like a cult member. Overall I give this novel a solid 4/5 and I highly recommend this novel.
I've only read 3 chapters and this makes me interested, but what I don't like is the writing of the author doesn't use spacing in each paragraph and almost combines each paragraph together. and to be honest, it made me quite confused when reading, and made me feel lazy about reading some things that I felt weren't important
Well, I don't know what to write, the overall storyline feels a bit strange, like everything is going too smoothly, well... However, I quite liked this novel, so don't drop it, because the story made me interested(I'm in a situation where I'm running out of novels that I can read)
The writing is chaotic, there is no distinction between narrative and dialogue between characters, even the author's notes are not marked to separate the contents of the novel, really messy and made me lazy to read because it made me confused when reading between narrative and dialogue, sorry if the other ratings are low but that's what I can conclude when reading the first few lines of the chapter due to the chaotic writing