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Rabin_Subedi · Anime et bandes dessinées
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Controlling Doflamingo

The villagers on the sky island didn't have much strength and were easily controlled just by a single drop of liquid. Mia could give a single order and they would always follow her order for the rest of her life. For example, she ordered most of the villagers to be loyal to the thunder pirates. And the villagers became very loyal. In fact, it was like making them the slave of thunder pirates.

They could order the villagers anything and they would do it. Even if they said die right now, the person who was made loyal to the thunder pirates would not hesitate to kill themself. In this way, she had made the people of the whole island loyal to the thunder pirates. But Mia also couldn't use the mind control liquid on the same person twice so she had to be careful what order she gave to the people.

Back to the present:-

After feeding 15 drops of mind control liquid to Trebol he was finally in the state where he would listen to a single order of Mia. Mia then ordered him to be very loyal to the thunder pirates. Then just to see if the mind control had worked. Rabin said "Trebol jump into the sea." Then he ran towards the edge of the ship and jumped into the sea.

Then Rabin smiled and said, "Looks like the mind control has worked." He looked towards Pratik and said "Go and save him" Pratik was very confused as to what was going on but he followed Rabin's order anyway. He also jumped into the sea caught Trebol and brought him back to the surface.

Then Mia started feeding the liquid to Diamante. While she was doing that Pratik was asking various questions to sital asking him what was going on then sital slowly started explaining Mia's power to sital. When Pratik heard what sital said she shouted "Holy shit Mia you Powers are OP, This is one of the rare moments where I want to eat the devil fruit."

Lana said, "Then Why don't you eat one who knows you might get some really overpowered ability." Pratik looked at her angrily and said "Don't try to tempt me into eating a devil fruit my fish man karate is way stronger than a devil fruit." Lana laughed and said, "Then why are you the weakest among all of us."

Pratik shouted, "Than put your money where your mouth is let's bet 100000 beli and see who is stronger." Lana took out her gun and said "Ready when you are." Rabin then looked at them and said "Shut up before I kick your ass." Then both of them immediately stopped their bickering.

Then after feeding 14 drops of liquid to Diamante he was in the state where he could be controlled than she also gave him the order to be loyal to thunder pirates. She repeated the process and controlled every member of the Donquixote Pirates who came to paradise except doflamingo.

Pica was controlled by using 13 drops. Whereas the remaining three officers were controlled by using only 6-7 drops of liquid. She ordered them all to be loyal to thunder pirates. Now only Doflamingo was left. Doflamingo was a lot stronger compared to anyone mia had controlled till now. So she was a little nervous.

Rabin said, "Don't be nervous if you fail we can just kill him." Mia nodded her head and went towards the unconscious doflamingo and started feeding him the red liquid drops by drops.

After a little while, she had already fed him 30 drops of liquid which were double the amount that took to control Trebol but doflamingo didn't look like he was going to be under her control any time soon. But she didn't lose hope and kept giving him red liquid.

She had already given him 500 drops of liquid but nothing happened. Now she was starting to lose hope she only had 948 drops of liquid left after she had controlled the 6 members of Donquixote Pirates. And now doflamingo had already taken 500 drops of it and showed no signs of being controlled.

Mia had now given up the hope and said "Looks like we can't control him let's not waste any more of the liquid on him." Rabin shook his head and said "We have already wasted so many liquids so why not go all in. Feed him all the remaining liquid at once. If we succeed then it's good and if we fail then that won't be too bad either."

Mia would almost always listen to Rabin and this time wasn't going to be any different. She did what Rabin told her to do. She fed the entire bottle to doflamingo. When the bottle was about to be empty she immediately pulled the bottle from doflamingo's mouth and she shouted "It worked."

Rabin had a huge smile on his face. The bottle was nearly empty there were now only 20 drops of liquid left on the bottle. Doflamingo took 928 drops of liquid before he was controlled by Mia. Then said, "Doflamingo I order you to be extremely loyal to us thunder pirates. And my first order is that you jump into the sea."

Then Doflamingo bowed down and said, "As you wish madam." And after saying that he jumped into the sea. Rabin smiled and he shouted, "You can come back up now." As soon as he said that Doflamingo shot his string and attached it to Traveler and easily came back up.

Then Rabin looked at lana and said "Bring out his ship. Lana brought out the broken ship of Donquixote Pirates and gave it to Rabin. Rabin gave the ship to doflamingo and Said fix it. Doflamingo easily fixed the ship with his string. Rabin then put the ship in the water and asked lana to return the ship to normal size.

"Doflamingo Go back to Dressroja and call all your strong officers to dressroja for a meeting. I want to control them all." Doflamingo nodded his head and said, " I will follow your order, sir."

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