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Immortal Path to Heaven

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"Master Ouyang, please smith a divine weapon for me!" "Master Ouyang, you're the only person who can forge a weapon with seven attributes. Please make my dream come true!" "Master Ouyang, could you..." "Ouyang my *ss! My surname is Ou!" Ou Yangming was an orphan who was adopted by a reputable old blacksmith from a military camp. After working as a helper under the old man for years, he was given a chance to acquire the Military Fire—a trait allowing him to smith and restore equipment with the Military Fire produced from his hands. Gifted with mental power, Ou Yangming controlled his Military Fire unusually well and was also strangely talented in martial arts. On top of it, he could also attach Unique Attributes into weapons with a hundred-percent success rate. Those who belittled Ou Yangming because of his background and age eventually honored him so much that they would do anything to get their hands on his equipment. Little did Ou Yangming know that as he slowly unfolded the mysteries of the Military Fire and his mental power, he was advancing step by step on the immortal path to Heaven!

Chapter 1Military Fire

"Heh! Hah! Kill! …'

On the training ground, thousands of armored soldiers armed with sabers and spears, bows and arrows, as well as shields, formed rows under the scorching sun to slash and shoot with all their might.

A mixture of sweat and manly smells filled the air, causing their blood to pump involuntarily.

Not far away from the training ground, at the outermost area of a row of barracks, a half-grown fellow watched the thousands of soldiers training, envious of them.

All of a sudden, a big hand reached for his neck from behind him.

"Ouch! Old man, be gentler. It hurts, it hurts…"

"Hmph, now you know that it hurts? I told you to do ironwork but instead, I find you here watching them do their drills, do you want me to drill you too?"

The young man shivered, then quickly said, "Old man, I was wrong, please don't!"

While gripping the young man's neck, the gray-haired elder lifted him and made a few turns to enter one of the barracks.

"Ou Yangming, I know you want to join them, but you can't do it now!" He put the young man down, and said, "Think about it again only when you grow older!"

Ou Yangming grimaced and rubbed his painful neck. "Old man, I've grown older!"

"You?" The elder cast a disdainful look at him, then reached for a broken saber in the corner. It was a military saber, but there was a fracture on the handle, rendering it useless.

After taking a look at the broken saber for some time, the elder placed the broken part on a platform. Subsequently, he rubbed his hand to create a flame around the fracture.

Ou Yangming widened his eyes, then straightened his body carefully while watching quietly, so as to not make any noise.

Although the old man often scolded and beat him, he knew that the unimpressive-looking old man was the only person who treated him sincerely in the military camp.

Roughly 30 minutes later, the elder exhaled deeply as he stopped. Some beads of sweat could be seen on his forehead, but when the flame disappeared, the fractured military saber had been fixed.

Ou Yangming took a step forward to pick it up, then checked it for a while before he commented, "Old man, you're godly! The connection is seamless! Hehe, in this military camp, you're definitely this!" He gave a thumbs-up and shook his hand a few times.

The elder smiled proudly, then asked, "Why? Do you want to learn?"

The young man sighed. "Of course, but I don't have the opportunity…"

The trick used by the elder was the military's secret art that originated from a Military Fire Smithing Technique gifted by the dynasty, which could not be pursued by normal people.

Ou Yangming was an orphan who grew up being fed by a hundred families in his village. He entered the military camp as a helper by coincidence and caught the eye of the lonely old man, whom he began learning forging from. Unfortunately, while the craftsman could be learned, the Military Fire was beyond reach.

The elder chuckled as he was pleased. "Oh right, take this saber to Zhang Yinfan, he's looking for you."

Ou Yangming frowned. "I'm not going! He's a stingy person, it's not good if he's looking for me!"

The elder glared at him, then kicked him. "Aren't you going?!"

He dodged the kick, and responded, "Yes, yes, yes, I'm going now." Then, scurried away with the fixed military saber.

The elder shook his head and sighed. "I wonder if his laziness can be changed. Hopefully, he'll be given a chance this time."

Ou Yangming hurried to the rear. Zhang Yinfan was part of the force as he was a provisions officer in charge of logistics. While it was not the main position, it was one of the deputy positions where one had real authority.

At the rear, just as Ou Yangming was about to say something after he passed the military saber to be recorded, the officer responsible for accounts said with a smile, "Fella, you're finally here, Sir Zhang told us to expect your arrival. Quick, go in."

He entered the rear but was slightly perturbed.

This was because he could not figure out why an important person like Zhang Yinfan was looking for a nobody like him.

In one of the barracks, a middle-aged man looked up upon Ou Yangming's arrival. He was a gentle white-faced scholar, which made him out of sync with the manly environment in the camp.

"Sir Zhang, were you looking for me?" Ou Yangming bowed and asked respectfully.

Zhang Yinfan nodded. "You're Ou Yangming, take a seat." He poured a cup of tea for him.

Ou Yangming was both surprised and happy. Zhang Yinfan had always been regarded as an untouchable figure, yet he was treating him kindly at the moment, which made him feel anxious.

"What's your relationship with Old Craftsman?" Zhang Yinfan asked abruptly.

The young man was stunned, but he quickly responded, "I'm just a helper who does miscellaneous work for him."

"Oh? Just a helper?" Zhang Yinfan seemed doubtful.

Ou Yangming immediately affirmed, "I'm really just a helper, you can ask around if you don't believe me. If I lied to you, I'm willing to be killed."

Zhang Yinfan finally loosened up and smiled. "I see." He pondered for a while, then continued, "Ou Yangming, I'd like to discuss something with you, would you be willing?"

Ou Yangming stood up, and answered, "Sir, what orders do you have?"

Zhang Yinfan had a friendly smile on his face. "It has been hard for you to work for Old Craftsman, hehe, I wonder if you'd like to come to the Provision Camp? If you'd like to, I'll guarantee you a way to become an official soldier."

Ou Yangming looked up right away as he was in disbelief.

Upon seeing him, Zhang Yinfan nodded satisfyingly. "Old Craftsman found a job for you, but in my opinion, it's not suitable." He then clapped his hands softly, and a handsome young man who was around Ou Yangming's age walked out.

"This is Zhang Hanyu, my nephew," Zhang Yinfan introduced, then mentioned coldly, "We'll meet a few senior officers in a while. You'll reject the job in front of them, then recommend Hanyu take over. Do you understand?"

Ou Yangming might be young, but he was not dumb. More than a decade of a lonely and bitter life had taught him well.

'This isn't a blessing at all, he's clearly trying to steal my benefit!'

Seeing that Ou Yangming was murmuring to himself, Zhang Yinfan's face turned cold. "You received orders from Old Craftsman, which means you're under my rule. Hehe, you should know what the consequences are if you don't obey me, right?"

Ou Yangming's face changed. Needless to say, he could sense the threat coming from those words.

Zhang Yinfan added, "Think carefully. If you listen to me, not only will I guarantee you a place as an official soldier, but I'll also give you a hundred taels of silver as your reward. If you don't…" When his voice slowly became softer, it was as though the room temperature lowered too.

Ou Yangming shuddered. He sensed slight pain on his skin and quickly realized that Zhang Yinfan was going to kill him.

Feeling appalled, he fell to the ground and replied, "I understand, I'll obey your orders!"

It was then when Zhang Yinfan finally showed a gentle face. He helped Ou Yangming up, and even knocked the dust out of his clothes for him. "Good, I admire young men like you. Remember your promise, and come with me."

Ou Yangming followed him obediently along with Zhang Hanyu.

On their way, he stole a glance at Zhang Hanyu and noticed that he was extremely elated.

He cried to himself. 'Old Craftsman, is the job you've given me a blessing or a curse…'

Before long, they arrived at a courtyard in the rear.

A brocade-clothed elder was seen sitting leisurely in the inner hall, and he stood and laughed as soon as he saw Zhang Yinfan. "Sir Zhang, did you bring him?"

Zhang Yinfan replied respectfully, "Sir, I've brought Ou Yangming." He then reached his hand out in introduction, "Sir, I've informed Ou Yangming about the matter, but he knows that he's not that blessed, so he dares not accept the job. As such, he wants to give the chance to a friend."

"Give the chance to a friend?" The brocade-clothed elder curled his lips and looked at Zhang Yinfan coldly.

Zhang Yinfan trembled a little, and he quickly explained, "Sir, you and my elder brother are both courtiers. He always says that you're just, stern, and sharp-eyed, so he told me to learn from you."

The brocade-clothed man was stunned. He hesitated for a while, then sighed. "I'm here by the order of the imperial court, thus I'm just here to carry out my duty. As long as everything complies with the rules, I'll act accordingly."

Zhang Yinfan was delighted. "Yes, sir, you're very wise!" He then turned to say, "Ou Yangming, this is Sir Hu from the imperial court's Inspection Division, quick, greet him!"

Ou Yangming responded nervously, "Greetings, Sir Hu."

The brocade-clothed man smiled. "I'm Hu Yicheng from the Inspection Division, what's your name?"

Ou Yangming secretly cursed him for asking deliberately, but he answered with respect, "I'm Ou Yangming from the Armament Camp, sir."

Hu Yicheng nodded lightly. "Alright, let me ask you. Do you refuse to receive the Military Fire, so you're giving the opportunity to him?" When he asked, he glanced at Zhang Hanyu who was behind Zhang Yinfan.

Zhang Hanyu's eyes instantly glowed and his muscles were slightly tensed up.

The handsome young man, who maintained a calm look until this moment, had finally revealed his nervousness.

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Volume 1
Volume 2
Volume 3
Volume 4

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This is a slow starting novel where author likes to introduce you to the world similar to novels like Record of a Mortal's Journey to immortality. As such, if you're looking for a standard fast paced typical xuanhuan then this is not it. That being said, this is a CRAFTING novel, more specifically a blacksmith crafting novel. MC gains a system where he can easily upgrade his smithed items with attributes. However, he doesn't abuse the system and instead learns how to craft without the system whilst learning many new blacksmith techniques e.g. Adding gems slots, making set items etc. The whole crafting process is very in depth and highly satisfying for crafting fanatics. A little similar to Upgrade Specialist in Another World, this novel although a Xuanhuan, has a more classical Xianxia setting and the crafting system is more fleshed out. The downside so far is its pretty crafting intense (approx 50%) so novel can feel VERY SLOW. The author has introduced a few different blacksmith type arcs (tests, new items) but there's very little drama or excitement which can make the novel a bit dull. The cultivation side is a bit more standard, he gets a "devouring" attribute which he puts on weapons to help him grow faster. Romance starts after a few hundred chapters and then stops for a long while - generally there isn't much. The MC is very cautious and calm, similar to Han Li (RMJI) and is very mature for his age (15). The cultivation progress is slow (in terms of chapters) but fast in terms of age. However, the balance isn't as good as RMJI because levels are split into 5 (which is too many) and so to keep the pacing the author has the MC 'skip' many levels at a time and he can constantly jump 1-2 large boundaries to fight. As such you can't feel the impact of a specific level. This is all confounded by the author not having a clear power structure that you don't really know how strong MC is (he was very strong in first few hundred chapters but because crafting chapters occupy bulk of novel it's unclear how strong MC is later on). The translation quality is great with very few grammar errors while the updates are regular. If you're looking for a more in depth blacksmith novel with an emphasis on crafting then give this novel a read. Translation should be done in 18 months at current rate. I dropped a star from initial 5 star to 4 star as although the crafting is great, author has got the balance wrong (too much crafting and not enough cultivation, drama, fighting etc) so novel can feel dry and difficult to continue reading at times. Update: I've currently taken a break from this novel with <300 chapters to go. One big gripe is he spends half the novel at the same cultivation boundary - because author writes long slow paced crafting arcs and then adds even more crafting e.g. Alchemy and formations, the cultivation time has to take a back seat. These newer crafts feel rushed as he quickly gets to the same level as his blacksmithing without the hard graft we've seen before so it all feels a bit cheap. The kicker is, after waiting for so long for him to gain the next cultivation level he starts getting fast power ups again. It all feels like lazy writing and you wonder why author didn't have a better pacing to the novel. It's not a bad read but if you're reading this as just a xuanhuan then the cultivation side is very dry and slow that I'd probably skip the novel. Read only if you really like crafting and don't mind slower, longer chapters.

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The start was not that bad honestly. translation quality wise there are some errors there and there but it is still readable. I can honestly also get behind that the main female is brain dead and falls deep in love with MC for absolutely no reason nor prior contact or before even having spoken a single word to him. However it went downhill when the author keeps forcing that random stone gambling garbage story line there. I am 100% thinking it should not even be a thing. Not only does he keep selecting trash stones each time but the reason he does so is not even properly explained, just half assessed excuses like, does not want to show off. I honeslty hate this type of stuff so much he is actively hiding his skill for no reason at all since we had seen no real consequences, like i wouldn’t mind he did as he is doing now if there are actual consequences shown but there isn’t, because there is a guy clearly known for picking right stones most of the time our of 10 and MC decides he needs to hide his skill and picks 2 with 8 empty stones. It’s honestly the whole story each time, he could have so much benefits showing off his skills but he doesn’t, every encounter there exists for the sole reason of trash talking MC before even knowing, the brain level of villains in this novel is simply in a word : abysmal. I’d rather honestly read about a MC that fights and figure out his own benefits first for doing this or that than one actively hiding his skill and crippling his ability in doing so and again for seemingly no proper reason given.

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