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UltimumEques
UltimumEquesLv34yr
2020-07-30 12:38

It's nothing special, but I do enjoy reading it. The premise is basically that the MC gets a special blacksmithing flame that lets him take attributes from other weapons and ores to forge better gear. I'd have rated a little higher, but I am a little put-off by the fact that the mc doesn't seem to really struggle for most of what he has. His special flame was found through some amount of innate ability but good luck. He wins his competitions relying on his ability rather than hard-earned skill even though he is supposedly a good smith even without it, and there are a few other points into the story that just feel like he rolled well on some cosmic random number generator. I know most cultivation novels have that "Cheat" that the MC's get, but this one just leaves me with the feeling that he doesn't deserve it. Despite that, as I said, I do enjoy the story. The characters aren't as one-dimensional as they are in most Xianxia. There are a few too many people that faun over the MC, but everyone has a valid reason for doing what they do at the very least. Anyway, overall it's solid. Not without its flaws, but it's better than 80% of the garbage out there.

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