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I reincarnated with a delivery system(Finishing my other fanfic)

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What is I reincarnated with a delivery system(Finishing my other fanfic)

Lisez le roman I reincarnated with a delivery system(Finishing my other fanfic) écrit par l'auteur Wazzup18 publié sur WebNovel. Kanashimi is the guy with a cheerful attitude an orphan and doesn't have a friend or basically a loner although he is quite handsome.His past time is reading a fanfic watching some animeKanashimi just...

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Kanashimi is the guy with a cheerful attitude an orphan and doesn't have a friend or basically a loner although he is quite handsome.His past time is reading a fanfic watching some anime Kanashimi just sleep at night and he got reincarnated as a delivery man. he got a delivery system which can travel many worlds (A/N:book cover not mine)

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Dao_of_Melancholy
Dao_of_MelancholyLv12Dao_of_Melancholy

I’m liking It it’s pretty good When I saw the title though I thought it was a cheap Poundland knock off of unconventional delivery system but it is different....

iliketosleep
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Make sure you capitalize the first letter of the first word in a sentence. Not my cup of tea but try it out, you may like it.

Synchroreach
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First stop using ok use alternatives such as (all right, fine, alright uh-huh and right) Next is capitalization it's very bad try to capitalize names,places or the first words of each sentence or whatever you call it Lastly dont add to much anime to the original world **. search for google for some good words alternatives so it does not get repetetive

Wazzup18
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give me your opinion wether the grammar is good or bad or the story is good or bad give me some tips if the grammar or my writing is wrong :)

JadePanda003
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Well, first of all, you should put a space right after a comma or period. Capitalization is also all over the place and it just made your hard work of making a story look rushed and lazily made. To solve these two problems, use some kind of app like WPS Office and write your chapters there in .txt format. You could use the review button so that you would be able to spot some minor grammatical errors.

REDVI
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Noice

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