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HARRY POTTER FANFIC

Hai guys it is my first time writing a novel so there will be so many grammatical mistakes so please do point it out for me and if there are any suggestions pls do mention them Two different people got a wish from R.O.B and they both are reincarcerated as cousins(boy/girl) in a muggle born with a soul connection and they both can use each other wishes. the whole story will be where MC will be mostly OP try reading it once and give me advise on how to develop the characters and how to be the dialogue writing. THANK YOU PLS ENJOY

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CHAPTER 3

When we were discussing what should we extract to get the best out of the novice gift

Aditya [ Do you have anyone in mind with good talent in magic ]

Aditi [ why are you thinking of only magic talent, we can take potions, charms, transfiguration, alchemy]

Aditya [ Do you remember the childhood of Tom, from an early age he has excellent talent in magic and he can even do it without Focus( An object which helps humans in channeling magic in more control and precise {Wand} different places has different types of focus ) If we have high talent in magic it will be useful in everything ]

Aditi [ If you say like that the people with the good talent I can remember are Dumbledore, Tom, for good magic talent, harry potter for broom riding, All professors in Hogwarts with their respective fields are also very talented ]

Aditi [let us go visit harry potter once]

Aditya got very confused by the sudden decision of her [ what the fuck, does she wants broom flying talent ]

Aditi [ you do know I can hear your thoughts right ]

Aditya [sorry]

Aditi [ Harry is a Horcrux so he has Toms soul in him, Tom is the one with the highest talent in magic we know at present ]

Aditya [ oh oh sorry I didn't think of that ]

We had decided to visit 4 Privet Drive once and see harry potter, to extract his legendary talents If we can, According to Aditi his home is very near and we might go to the same school as him.

Next whole week I was busy with school transfer and doing remaining procedures

I and Aditi are in a different class

As soon as I had entered the class, It is like I have entered a zoo Some are shouting, one guy, is biting the person to his next one Fat guy with his two friends is kicking a small one,

I don't know what to do, Do I have to spend my next 5-6 years with these people

I went directly to the fat guy who is kicking and stopped him

"can you stop this mate" I was trying to be polite, I don't have proper etiquette so spare me

"He is a freak, My mother told me to play like this with the Freak" Fat guy was shouting at me while spraying my whole face with his saliva

I am getting Irritated by him "Teacher is coming we can talk about this later, ok " I didn't even give him a glace and lifted the boy who is still rolling on the ground and we sat on the last bench

"Hai, I am Aditya Brown " introduced myself to him

Now I see him clearly, He has black hair with emerald green eyes and a lightning bolt scar

Now it suddenly clicked me who he is and who that fat guy is

"haai I am ha-harry potter"

Aditya [ Hey I got good news for you ]

Aditi [ what ]

Aditya [ harry potter is in my class and sitting next to me ]

Aditi [I will come in break time to visit him ]

I and Harry talked some time, It is me talking mostly and he answering yes or hmm

break time came and I can see Aditi coming into class

As soon as her eyes fell on the boy next to me it glowed stars in it

Aditi [ He has so many cards, I can see two orange cards 'MAGIC TALENT' & 'MAGIC THEORY COMPREHENSION' ]

Aditya [ extract them both, take magic talent with novice gift as it will be upgraded on rarity and comprehension take it normally we can wait one year for the next one ]

Aditi [ ok]

Aditya [ Just extract don't absorb them here ]

Aditi [ I know ]

I can see two orange color cards floating above him it is really beautiful, immediately I activated my novice gift and selected his magic talent, after extracting the magic talent immediately I have also extracted comprehension with both cards in my mental space I am very happy. I have decided

Aditi [ I have extracted both of them ]

Aditya [ great tonight we can absorb them ]

Aditi [ I have decided to help harry from now, I also want you to help him, we both are getting his talents so we should help him ]

THANKS FOR YOUR SUPPORT:-

Saleh_AL_ameri

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NetherDrake_57

TAINA

Saleh_AL_ameri

For aditya out of 4 people he is summoning I have thought of 2

(mind arts )(alchemy) so please help me what does the remaing 2 summons to specialize in

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