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God of Tricksters

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Synopsis

"God of Mischief is interested in you and wants you to be his emissary. Do you accept?" With blood and wounds covered his entire body, the voice echoing inside his mind was like that of a hope shining upon him. In the glorious future era, mankind had discovered the bottom of the sea and conquered the sky, but they also accidentally opened the Pandora box that shouldn't be opened. They found a place where lived numerous unknown creatures. Here, humans will wrest their lives to step upon their greatest evolution and create their own myths, including Theodore. Faced with betrayals, surrounded by beasts, and faced with imminent death, he answered with resolve and tenacity. "Yes!" ------- Other works: 1. I Can Read People's Comment 2. Oil Tycoon: Let's Find Oil in a Martial World 3. Gacha Sovereign (Completed) 4. The Magician of Sound (Completed) 5. Reincarnated to Bonk in Another World (Completed) ------- Discord Server: https://discord.gg/yFvfjxRQag

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Chapter 1Emissary

Under a huge tree in a forest, a young man was thrusting his spear that looked like it was made of gold and silver toward a turtle that hid inside its own shell. The spear went inside the hole, and blood soon started dripping out the hole.

[Killed a Carnivore Turtle (Normal)]

[EXP+1]

"Nice work, Theodore." A young man walked toward him. He had short spiky yellow hair and wore a red-colored leather jacket. For his bottom, he had long pants with the same material as his jacket while using a pair of big boots reinforced with steel.

"Yeah, thanks." He nodded as a strange blue screen appeared.

Name: Theodore Griffith

Status: Normal

Level: 7

EXP: 25/42

Blessing: None

Skill: Pierce (F), 9 Slots Remaining

Attributes: Strength 10, Endurance 5, Agility 9, Vitality 5, Magic Power 20

Free Attribute Points: 0

'I have received three experience points from two turtles. Since the experience is shared, I can't really complain, considering the fight has become easier with their help.' Theo let out a long sigh.

"I am sorry that you are being held back since you are helping me." Another person that turned out to be a beauty came into the scene. She had long blonde hair tied into a ponytail. Her hands were clenching a silver staff with a blue ball on the top. She wore a light-yellow blouse coupled with long pants to avoid injuries over something small. Still, the combination of all of them made her look cute, especially with the addition of her innocent face.

"It's fine. In this situation, we should help each other out." The guy suddenly stopped her from apologizing as if he tried comforting her.

"…" Theo only watched the guy's action in silence before shaking his head.

"Anyway, we should continue." The guy then turned to Theo with a smile while his gaze still remained on the female.

Deciding not to think more about it, Theo agreed. He first touched the turtle shell as it disappeared into thin air, leaving nothing behind. He thought nothing of it and moved on.

But when the two were about to follow him, loud noises echoed in their surroundings, alarming the whole forest. Even birds immediately flew to the sky to avoid as if something big would happen soon.

Theo glanced over his surroundings before finding the ground shaking.

"This…What is happening?!" The girl panicked and screamed. Her face turned pale and she subconsciously leaned on the boy next to her.

If it happened before, the boy would have hugged and comforted her, but the shaking ground made his feet go limp. It took all his energy just to stand still.

Theodore gritted his teeth as soon as he found that the sound grew closer and closer. He then turned around and yelled. "Run!"

Out of instinct, the two turned around and began running. No matter what their running form was, they needed to go as fast as possible to avoid whatever that was coming their way.

Even Theo followed right behind them and soon caught up. He turned his head to see what was happening behind him and dropped his jaw.

Trees were falling down one after another because of a strange creature. It looked like the turtle from earlier but covered in grey colors. Instead of a pattern on its shell, it had some sort of rock formation sticking out of its shell. The height alone reached six feet tall with the width twice of that number.

"That is a Rock Turtle! The leader of the Carnivore Turtle we killed earlier! It's an elite monster that has far surpassed our level. But it should be miles away from us, not here!" Theo exclaimed in surprise.

Over a few hundred years ago, the Earth experienced high-level technology, starting from communication or even transportation. They might only be a few steps away from building a spaceship that was capable of traveling inside a black hole.

With technology like that, humanity found a way to explore the sea and conquer the sky. To their surprise, under the bottom of the sea, they found a "Pandora Box."

When they opened it, Earth transformed into something that even science couldn't comprehend. One thousand pillars of light shot through the sky, leaving a kind of magic circle behind all over the world.

Out of curiosity, humans checked the magic circles only to find themselves teleported into a very strange place. It was a completely different world. A world that human beings couldn't have imagined.

In this world, the humans brought their guns, tanks, or even fighter jets to explore the new place. But all of a sudden, they were attacked by strange monsters inside the realm. Their weaponry was able to fight them, but it turned out that the monsters living there were only the lowest of the lowest.

As soon as the strong monsters appeared, they obliterated the entire armed force from humanity. The human beings that once stood on top of the food chain fell to the bottom.

However, humanity didn't entirely leave with an empty hand. They discovered another source of strength, new to this world. They were surprised to find their body evolved when they killed monsters, turning the whole situation into a game-like world.

What made people surprised was that with the addition of this new power, people started receiving a strange voice in their head, introducing themselves as some sort of beings. It was then categorized into seven: Normal (F), Elite (E), Champion (D), Hero (C), Supreme (B), Mythical (A), and God (S).

They later realized that the ranking was completely the same as the monsters in that world, making humanity think that beings of the past, human or not, that had left their legends on Earth granted them power.

People could lift a huge boulder or even destroy a skyscraper with this power. The human then united and returned to that world once again, finding that the most primitive fighting skills that were almost forgotten in modern society could be combined with the power coming from the other side to create something more powerful.

The Martial Arts society united and was reinstated, creating a school for many who aspired to be a strong fighter on the other side. The stronger you were, the more respected you were in the eyes of society. It became a popular belief, and many people joined the school, trying to change their fate.

Of course, most didn't survive in this harsh world. The horrible creatures that resided in this world murdered many people, but some succeeded in life and became famous.

Theodore Griffith was also one of the aspiring people that wanted to change his fate. Unfortunately, he fell into a situation where people got killed by monsters. To survive, the only way to do it was to run.

It was at this moment the event that turned his life upside-down took place.

"Kya!" The girl tripped on a big root sticking out of the ground. She immediately tried to rise again but to no avail.

Theodore turned around and grabbed her hand, pulling her up. The other one also helped her up before noticing that a mere few seconds were what it took for the turtle to catch up with them.

Out of desperation, the woman instinctively pulled Theodore's hand even stronger. At the same time, the man beside him pushed his back.

With the sudden push, Theo stumbled and fell instead. The two only gazed at him with veins bulging on their forehead as if they did what they needed to do with so much stress.

Theo stretched his hand and opened his mouth wide, albeit no word came out.

In school, he was often bullied by his classmates because of his unbalanced state. Looking at his status, he appeared to be someone who excelled in both magic and physical ability. However, his status was nothing compared to those who only excelled in one aspect.

With the addition of his poor status, he became a perfect target for people to satisfy their ego that they were above someone else and got bullied as a result.

Nonetheless, he decided to continue his life as if nothing happened, ignoring the bullies since none of them actually tried to kill him or something. He strongly believed that there would be a time where he could change his standing until he got into a situation that kept his sanity this whole time, the betrayal.

He then sensed the turtle's presence next to him as he instinctively raised his spear to the side. The turtle struck the spear with its head, almost snapping it into two. It didn't stop there. The force behind it kept pushing until it reached Theodore and blew him away.

Bam!

"Kah!" Theodore spat a mouthful of blood as he realized some of his bones were broken when he crashed into a tree. Due to the impact, his head also hit the tree pretty hard, and blood flowed down his face, dyeing his vision red.

'Ugh. I can't move." Theo thought after realizing he had no energy left to even open his mouth.

The monster looked at him, stood proudly, and roared as if telling him that it would kill him.

'Is this the end?' Regret filled his heart. In the face of death, a certain thought appeared in his mind. 'Humanity is idiotic, greedy, prideful, resentful, depraved…In the face of death, betrayal is what most people think. To save their own life, they could do whatever.'

'...'

'Humanity…Is a f*cking piece of shit.'

'Ah. How wonderful it is if I have the power to reset mankind once again? They won't be any worse than this, right?' His vision had turned blurry, and his consciousness had become fuzzy, knowing that his death was near. No matter how he cursed humanity, his wish wouldn't be fulfilled. 'If only I have another chance.'

He looked at the turtle that wanted to crush him, gradually closed his eyes, and accepted his death before a strange voice echoed in his ears.

[God of Mischief is interested in you and wants you to be its emissary. Do you accept?]

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MythicSnow
MythicSnowLv15

Alright. First off, this review is SPOILER FREE. Second, this is as of chapter 390, so I feel I have a good enough feel of the story, since as of this moment, 390 is the most recent chapter. Thirdly, there's two parts to this review. One will be my personal opinion. The other will be facts based around the 5 sets of stars you judge on when making reviews. First, the writing quality is really good. I don't notice many grammatical errors or spelling mistakes. And the few that I do, don't disrupt the flow of the story, or break the immersion. Earlier on there might have been more, but I can't remember. Though nowadays it seems like there's none at all. Speaking of earlier on to nowadays, the story development has been amazing. It's not too fast paced, nor to slow. It's well balanced with the arcs. While there are time skips, they're short bursts rather than years at a time. So the flow is nice, and smooth. Now on to Character Design! The characters are all full of life. They have their own emotions, and stories. They're incredibly detailed and don't all seem the same. They don't seem like extras, or side characters. They aren't disposable, nor forgettable. They have depth, and they matter! I'm sure you'll find yourself loving many of them. While some you may relate to. This one's shorter. Update stability. It's good. Only hiccup recently was a small dip in chapters a week because the Author was hospitalized, but they're okay now! Finally, World Background! This, in my opinion is phenomenal. The power levels, the creatures, the phasing of our world as we know it, and the other side. The attention to detail of even the smaller things just adds more life a realness to the story. I find myself often not having enough details in a story to completely immerse my mind into the world I'm trying to see, but in this story.. In this story it's as if a movie is playing in my mind. I guess this is the really "Finally". My opinion. This story has quickly become a top 3 to top 5 of mine on this app. At least, of novels I've read on this app in particular. Not including other sites. I have a top 20 chart in my notepad app on my phone that is densely packed with completed stories I've read. However, it wouldn't be fair to compare those like "The King's Avatar", or "Coiling Dragon" to this one, as it's not done. Though with the way it's going, I could see it surpassing those ones, even if that's only in my heart. So.. this would definitely be in my top 3 to top 5 of ONGOING stories. If you read all of this, I hope you have a wonderful day! And if YOU have read this Author-san, thank you for this fantastic world that I've fallen in love with. <3

CorvinCorvus
CorvinCorvusLv15
Lovidicus
LovidicusLv2
ctleans
ctleansLv2

140 chapters-ish in. If it does get better right after that I wouldn't know because I don't plan to continue reading. This does contain a bit of spoilers but it is only for mostly early chapters and it breaks the formatting so I won’t be marking it as such. This story did not give me the "kick" I have found in the stories I have read so far. By the 140th chapter, a reader can be expected to be hooked, to be immersed in the world enough to see the developments of the story as familiar. However, up to this point, the plot has been largely unamusing, confusing, and often inconsistent. I - Plot holes This is not going to be a full on critique of realisticness, as that isn't a necessity of an engaging story. One big problem I have with the setting is the lack of *practical* technology. The story likes to use the excuse of the presence of monsters as a magical way to disregard technology. You can't launch satellites sure but mobile devices and internet have no need for satellites. They are facilitated by cell towers which shouldn't be that hard to build. Theo getting assassinated is a plot hole because mobile devices should exist, and he could just make some call to emergency services to protect himself. Unless... of course, they were out of range. In that case, where are the vehicles? There are vehicles (humvees) designed to traverse hazardous environments. Now all of this could be avoided by providing some more petty excuses which I would happily accept, but as of now, there are none. A suggestion for the story: just abandon the whole "separate world with monsters but no technology" gimmick altogether. Also try giving a gun to your weak characters. If a gun is ineffective against weak monsters, and a weak character is able to kill a weak monster, then a gun is ineffective against weak characters? It's guns work or they don't. How about a tank? A nuclear bomb? There's a limit to how much "weapons are weak against monsters so we must use medieval era weapons" you can put in a story with future tech like a Sky.. net.. web.. link? I forgot. Additional nitpicks: The couple at the start of the story talking about how they MURDERED someone in public? You had to be a genius to attain hero rank but now Theo is supposed to do it in 3 months and it is suddenly a normal and easy thing to do? Theo is a genius now because he's picking "le breathing and l'awareness" easily but when did he become a genius... how? ...and other plot holes stated in other reviews I won't bother plagiarizing. II - Writing It doesn't need to be said that the english on this site is... not exactly up to the standards you would find in an normal english book. From the few other stories I have read so far, very often there are grammatical errors present. I do commend the author for not having as much grammatical errors and using more "formal" vocabulary. However, the underlying nitpick I have is the "flow" of the story. The story all too often has the need to explain something that the reader already knows. You can remind them using dialogue. It's also a bit awkward to straight up give information to the reader. You can find this in the form of internal monologues, specifically where Theo contemplates a decision (there is a lot of this going on) that doesn't need to be written out because it's not that important to the story besides a few sentences. More critique from a kid failing his english class: NEVER use contractions and informal speak (swearing) in narration. This is fine if the narrator is part of the story, but not in this one. Also try refraining from doing the inverse— using formal vocabulary in casual dialogue. "I will shamelessly utilize this opportunity" - It's awkward. III - Story/World Is it that I (try to) read too fast, I get distracted too easily, I'm not paying enough attention, or all of the above? The story is really hard to follow. Why does Theo pick Laust? He knows Laust resents him but he picks him anyways and is surprised when Laust doesn’t want to fight. The fight scenes are hard to follow as well. It gets even more confusing when you pit 5 against 5 and you have to visualize: person 1-10 are in their respective positions but then person 1 moves in front of person 6 and their CLONE is magically behind person 9 and is about to attack person 7 when person 4 intercepts… The power system is a weird mix between levels, skills, “awareness,” and “experience.” It really does start out with levels, but then each additional factor is added and it becomes really a “You can get X easily but what you really need is Y.” Additionally I don't consider this particularly fast paced despite the tag, this is actually the primary reason I dropped the novel. In the last 2 novels I have read, by now the character has: surpassed their bullies by a huge margin, finished exacting their revenge, discovered a new conspiracy about death/disappearance of family/friends, triggered a hidden power in their inner self that scares everyone, and is now on a quest for further vengeance. I apologize if I just spoiled every novel that exists and will exist on this site, but yeah, the pacing is not that fast. IV - Character(s) I think beyond the archetypes of bullies, girlfriends, and mentors, the story fails to portray Theo as a likeable protagonist. In the first few chapters Theo is weak (as usual) but then gets betrayed. Note he says one of those cliche "humans are evil and something something I want to purge them all." The story then forgets all about it in the next 100 chapters or so and doesn't seem to have any intention of bringing that back again. He is able to level up faster though levels supposedly don't matter that much. Besides that, what is special about him? He's smart and able to come up with plans and outsmart his peers? I'd have to disagree, it's more like the other characters are dumber. 'Ah yes you stole my kill so now I am scared and I feel like you have control over me' - what? What is so special about his clone skill? So he doesn’t have friends? What is so special about leveling up his skills? How is that “cheating the system?” I think the story is poorly thought out and the writer really intended on making things up along the way while forgetting the details made early on. I like how I’m logged in to web novel and I try to submit but it shows me login screen and I lose all my progress and have to use this text file I luckily had.

ForceRecon
ForceReconLv1

I've read around 200 chapters at this point to keep giving it another chance but the more I read the more I'm disappointed, this isn't 'God of Trickers', it's 'World of Low Standards'. Theo, the MC, will play dead and his enemies will go "OH MY GOD, WHAT A GENIUS, UNBELIEVABLE, HOW COULD SOMEONE BRILLIANT EVER BE BORN IN THIS WORLD, I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING". MC will do some ridiculously basic strategy a 13 or 14 year old could come up with, probably younger since they play so much games these days and you don't know what they're exposed to but then someone will go "MY GOD, A GENIUS, A GENIUS, HOW COULD HE BE SO BRILLIANT!" MC will reflect after a battle with his teammates and they'll go "MY GOD, HE'S THINKING 100 YEARS AHEAD, REFLECTION!?!!??!? WE CAN DO THAT!???????? OMG, WE CAN THINK ON OUR FAULTS!?!?!?!??!? THEO YOU MADMAN, YOU GENIUS" If we go by DC comics and their "Genius level intellect" for the most intelligent beings then MC has "Low level intellect", he's capable of coming up with thoughts a normal person might have but the world overreacts because the standards are so absurdly low I'm not really keeping a list to go over specifics but by chapter 200 you'll have noticed that the standards for the world are low Also, levels in this novel have no meaning whatsoever, I'm not even sure why they were added I really did try hard to enjoy this novel but I agree with other reviews that there are a lot of glaring issues with this and I don't doubt them that their are plenty of plotholes that will rear their heads if you continue reading There are no tricks here, they literally call anything a trick Dogs could be called tricks for the relevance of the word in this novel

ResidentialPsycho
ResidentialPsychoLv15

God of Tricksters is an action/adventure/mystery series about Theo, who becomes blessed by the God of Mischief. However, these concepts are inconsistent with the early story. Rather than creating mischief or performing tricks, Theo relies heavily on strategy. He specializes in outwitting his opponents and controlling the battlefield. For some reason, characters in this series refer to such strategy as “tricks,” even though this doesn’t make sense in English. Hundreds of chapters later, this improves, and Theo begins to incorporate a little mischief into some of his actions, but it’s still quite low for what I would expect from the follower of the God of Mischief. The actual “tricks” he performs are skills with magic. They are literally called “skills.” In fact, it is more accurate to refer to them as skills or techniques rather than tricks. While Theo definitely tricks and deceives his opponents, he doesn’t necessarily perform “tricks” to do so. This may be a subtlety in the English language where the verb and the noun don’t exactly have the same meaning. Unfortunately, this makes the title of the series rather awkward when put with the rest of it. The emphasis of “tricks” in the narrative doesn’t match the context much of the time either. There are numerous other grammatical and vocabulary issues with the English language, such as “female cowboy” being used rather than “cowgirl,” the confusion between a house and a mansion (a place that is only 2,500 sq ft is way too small to be a mansion), and so on. There are also a lot of gender inconsistencies. An editor who knows English as a first language would help this series substantially. The writing can be confusing at times, partially due to the writing of English itself and partly due to leaving important details out. There area number of things that don’t make sense in the initial setting, and there are plot details and consequences that don't make sense later on. Just because Theo cheated a group out of a fruit, why are the person who initially provoked him and his father being imprisoned for life? If they were cheated, then wouldn't they just sue to get what they're owed? The characters have depth with their own goals and enemies, and their character development makes sense. The unnatural hair colors are a little confusion. Just how many characters have dyed their hair pink or blue in this story? The setting wasn’t established very clearly, so it is very confusing for new readers in the beginning. The MC lives in a poor country where the wealthy and powerful have no concern for the law. People don’t look after the welfare of children, don’t manage bullying, and don’t care if a child is on the side of the road starving to death. Instead of reporting the kid to the authorities to be taken into foster care or juvenile detention, they just beat these dying kids half to death and leave them to rot. It’s quite strange and would have helped substantially if the author explained this in the beginning. That said, the writing improves a lot as it goes. Later in the series, there are interesting action and adventure scenes linking up together at an interesting pace, so I would recommend giving this series a try and being patient with it.

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