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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Suspicion Rising (25)

'Destroying their planet is the logical outcome' Freiza thought leaving his stasis chamber. He had been doing a lot of thinking since Beerus had told him to blow up the Planet and he reached a conclusion.

While the Saiyans and Freiza shared a common thirst for conquest and desire to overpower others, that was where their similarities ended. Unlike Freiza, the Saiyans were not powerful enough to justify their actions, as weak as they were they still were able to kill systematically and continually.

This confused Freiza.

Especially when his justification was that everything else in the universe was below him and destined to be under him. How can you kill something on the same level as you and be unperturbed afterwards? It was downright sociopathic.

Freiza was more and more confident that killing the Saiyans was the right call, he had no idea what the Saiyans had done to trigger Lord Beerus and he didn't care. Freiza remembered his father's words clearly.

"There are two people you should never cross: Majin Buu and Beerus the Destroyer"

Everyone else was free game.

"Lord Freiza!"

Freiza was pulled out of his thoughts by the shout of one of his soldiers, he scowled but was still polite.

"What do you want Dodoria?"

"Saiyan elders have managed to decode some archives and have uncovered rumours of a Super Saiyan transformation, one that could multiply a Saiyan's strength by 50!"

Frieza's expression changed but his mind had never been more clear in his life.

"They have to die"

"F-Furthermore! It says there is an ancient ritual they can perform to create a Super Saiyan God!" Dodoria exclaimed, not quite believing the status report he was reading.

"Dodoria send 'healthcare packages' to all of the Saiyans off-world," Freiza said, smiling wickedly.

"Yes Lord Freiza!" Dodoria said, exiting immediately.

"Oh and tell that sorry excuse for a pilot his time is up," Freiza said cooly, malicious intent radiating off his body.

"Y-Yes Lord Freiza!" Dodoria said running quickly.

On another Planet.

"HUUUAAAAGGGH!"

A huge beam of ki roared out of an Oozaru's mouth, burning at least a couple dozen people to shreds.

BOOM!

A massive explosion burst out destroying much of the little architecture the innocent civilisation had.

"RRROOOAAARRRR!" the Oozaru's bellowed in unison, windows and ear-drums alike shattering under the unforgiving shockwaves that bounced around the barren plain. They couldn't even flee in peace as a deadly laser beam followed their every step.

Five Huge Oozaru's stomped madly on the land, destroying houses and people in the process. The shouts and cries of the aliens were drowned out by the random rampage of the monsters, thick beams of ki shooting out of the mouths of the Oozarus.

These Oozaru's in particular, had huge pieces of armour equipped, each sporting a massive chest plate of various colours. After a few hours, the race being besieged gave up hope on survival, the giant monkeys had followed them relentlessly massacring each of them. They didn't even seem to be satisfied with the destruction they caused, fist and feet cruelly smashing into the environment.

"HUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-"

All five giant apes in a surprising show of coordination all charged their lasers in their mouths before collectively jumping high into the sky and emptying their ki reserves on the fragile land below them.

BOOOOOOOOOOOM!

An explosion that was visible from other planets engulfed the civilisation as a whole, turning whatever was there into a wasteland.

The civilisation continued to burn until the next day.

Five humanoid figures could be seen sitting on rocks in the middle of a massive crater.

"So Bardock, I hear you had another baby! Who's the mother? Is it Fasha?" a man named Chugesh said.

"Nah she's too much of a dyke, we'd never get along," Bardock replied.

"I'm right here you know! God, I hate men!" Fasha bickered.

"See?" Bardock said.

The rest of them chuckled unaware of the actions that were taking place a few meters away.

A single humanoid awoke from the rubble, bursting forth towards the sound of chatter. It was 5'10 in height and resembled a bipedal fish, its clothes were tattered and dusty but it charged towards them determinedly.

"Even if you slaughter all of us, our visions we still live on!" it shouted.

"The fuck it say?"

"I don't know I don't speak ugly"

Bardock rushed towards it, charging his fist with ki and thrust it out quickly, not wasting a single movement.

The creature front-flipped, in a bold display of acrobatics, completely dodging Bardock's blow which brushed air.

FYING!

The creature extended a claw laced with a strange application of ki and stabbed Bardock at the back of his neck, his tough Saiyan skin voiding much of the damage.

"Hyaaaah!" Toma yelled throwing a small ball of ki into the creature.

The ki blast killed on impact, destroying more than half the creature with a single attack.

Bardock collapsed to the floor, eyes wide open as his brain was sen into overdrive.

"Now we have to carry his body back!" Chugesch whined.

Bardock's mind buzzed, a series of changing colours flashing in and out of his vision.

'What's going on?' Bardock thought, his mind echoing his words.

Then everything turned white before he saw a clear picture, he saw a young boy abandoned in the middle of the woods being picked up by a weak-looking old man, then the scenery changed and he saw the same young boy behind a girl on top of a strange machine.

"What the fuck is this?"

The scenery changed once again and he saw the same young boy fighting a bunch of other people in some kind of tournament and getting absolutely smacked by a taller dark-haired young man.

Then everything turned black.

"Pecking order!"

"ARRGGGGGH!"

Bardock opened his eyes startled only to realise that he was in a stasis chamber. He quickly climbed out and was approached by a Saiyan elder.

"Bardock are you feeling ok?"

"Yeah, I'm fine," Bardock said, trying to shake off the surreal imagery he had just seen.

"Your son was just taking out of the emergency care, there were a few complications but he should be fine now," the elder said.

'I have one of those? Oh, God! I have two of those!'

"You might want to pay him a visit, you didn't last time," the elder said judgingly

"With Raditz?" Bardock questioned, only for his eyes to expand.

"Will do, where's my team?"

"Freiza assigned them a brand-new mission, I'll send you the co-ordinates!" the elder said, walking away now that he confirmed Bardock was not injured.

"A new mission? What could that purple shit-stain want now?"

[Read the Author's Comment]

There's a 12-year time skip coming up should I break it down 3 years at a time or one big jump?

I really need some answers here!

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