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cobra kai: The Prodigy

Auteur: DaoistMrYOP5
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Lisez le roman cobra kai: The Prodigy écrit par l'auteur DaoistMrYOP5 publié sur WebNovel. Alex, a poor boy whose life has been very lonely, dies suddenly and is reincarnated in Cobra Kai as a baby named Robby Keene with a talent for perfectly copying any martial art he sees and a body with...

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Alex, a poor boy whose life has been very lonely, dies suddenly and is reincarnated in Cobra Kai as a baby named Robby Keene with a talent for perfectly copying any martial art he sees and a body with superhuman potential. Decide to enjoy this life 100%

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Grammar is horrid, would suggest an editor or an app to help. Character introduction isn't very creative or original. There's alot of "he did this and then he did that and then he got this". Break it out and go into it. Restart the character introduction by developing his personality traits and try to make sense of why he would do certain actions, instead of "He got really successful by himself really fast because he did this and this and this, then he met his dad and got angry with his mum and kicked his dad". Why would a lonely guy who reincarnates into a fictional world and got the ability to learn at an accelerated rate and became a self made millionaire have issues with his current absent parents?

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thank you for the good work I will continue to give you power stones

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Terrible story, barely legable and completely unbelievable.

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I assure you, I'm not kidding around when I say that the writing is of such abysmal quality that it's truly, and I mean truly, causing me an excruciating headache; it's as if the words on the page have conspired to create a pounding, relentless discomfort in my head.

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