why didn't his magical animal affinity help with the three headed dog

it reminded me alittle bit of The Order from netflix

it has potential

this author seriously knows how to write amazing stories

one of the best lines ever

did you forget that poseidon was so close to going to war with Zeus since he threatened Percy when he thought he stole the bolt if zues really did strike it would be a bloodbath since poseidon flaw is loyalty just like his son

it's true Zeus doesn't think much about stuff like that but I think Athena would most like caution him and he does listen to her. And it doesn't matter if hades isn't an Olympian because Lucian has the backing of ares, demeter( because of Persephone), hermes, hades, poseidon ( because of his own son), and the FATES. Lucian will fight to protect his siblings so I'm pretty sure poseidon would be able to reveal Percy with a problem.

hades would be mad because he has 3 kids and if zues is willing to kill a son of poseidon then what would stop him from killing them. And zues would care because a decision like that would anger poseidon, hades, and some of the Olympians enough to trap him or overthrow him like before

true but he wouldn't be able to attack him without upsetting hades and poseidon

yeah but since a son of hades and a daughter of Zeus are alive poseidon doesn't need to hide percy

you're doing great don't let bad comments get you down.

I've had no problems reading. keep up the good work.

Melissa, jiro, toga

I am invested

love it

good start. looking forward for more.

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keep up the amazing work