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A Skeptical Slytherins Revolution

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(currently experiencing slower updates) In a wizarding world marred by inefficiency and stagnation, the Malfoy family stands as a pillar of archaic tradition and privilege. Enter Draco Malfoy's twin sister, born with memories from a modern world where innovation thrives and progress is embraced. The new greatest genius of the generation, who wishes not just to become the strongest, but drag the entire wizarding community up with her. ********** This is the first thing I'm writing on here or any site for that matter, If it gets dropped out of the blue bully me in the comments and ill probably come back in shame. Hope you all enjoy.

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lobsxz
lobsxzLv14lobsxz

a good idea. I only have one problem the paragraph are to full, so it's hard to focus. I advise to to shortening it like instead of making it the for the same amount of word's

Troy34
Troy34Lv1Troy34

Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book 📚📚📖

NxSyth
NxSythLv1NxSyth

The author has introduced some creative ideas into this fanfiction mainly about magic, that has been very interesting to read although the charactors all sound nearly the same, the author should try changing how he/she words things in every charactors perspective, also I think the author's portrayal of Dumbledore is faulty, in this fanfiction Dumbledore sounds like a middle aged man without any of the usual Dumbledore wisdom, the use of ai is destroying the story, the wording is terribly redundant in some areas and reading this awfully bland writing style makes me want to tear out my hair.

ReadinSomeShit
ReadinSomeShitLv14ReadinSomeShit

I really enjoy your development, characters, and grammar but it’s gotten really really weird to continually remind myself this is STILL about someone barely a toddler. Seriously, please age her up.

ChanceofRice
ChanceofRiceLv1ChanceofRice

Fun and insightful. Hopefully, this story does not go the way of most fanfics. I wish the author great success if only for the fact that the story they are writing is a great read.

_Wessix4Ever
_Wessix4EverLv13_Wessix4Ever

the English is good but the character is already doing things the most full grown wizards wouldnt even try like If you think turning into an animal is dangerous try messing with ur brain mcgonagall. it leaves me concerned that the character will be so ridiculously overpowered that any problems or conflict they encounter will be redundant since they'll solve it easily

Anmortis
AnmortisLv3Anmortis

Will there be romance? If so, will it be F/M or yuri?

Fatih_Zenginol
Fatih_ZenginolLv1Fatih_Zenginol

I probably read every hp fanfic and this one can be placed first 30 easily don't think too low there's more than 100 hp fanfic in the list . Only thing I worry is mc being overpowered in later chapters but with time skips and creativity.

Neoalgas
NeoalgasLv15Neoalgas

the story has started a bit slow but has great potential looking forward to how it develops

Fat_Elf
Fat_ElfLv3Fat_Elf

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Red_panther
Red_pantherLv5Red_panther

Really good fanfictions, I enjoyed reading it and am still looking forward to seeing where it's going to go.

tbfog
tbfogLv1tbfog

Falls into the trap of some Reincarnation stories fall into of having the super smart baby cliche when the genius MC is remaking magic as a 1 year old. Please, just let the store flow with some time skips. Give the character some room to breath.

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