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Zarion116
Zarion116Lv151mth
2024-09-16 05:17

With some more polishing/editing this gem of spicy smut could shine a lot brighter. Try not to rely on grammarly too much but pace yourself and reread your chapter before posting. Fix any mistakes. Still put Max stars cause has plenty of decent smut scenes.

The middle-aged man.

Ahmed_Koroma_1382
4.7
214 Chs

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Ahmed_Koroma_1382
Ahmed_Koroma_1382Author

Thank you for the review. I will go back over the beginning ones. After finishing this volume, I am close to its ending. I have already written the outline for part of the second volume, so I will have some spare time to fix anything that I find wrong. Thank you again for the review.

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Zarion116
Zarion116Lv15

No problem author if you set up a patreon or subscribestar I’d subscribe. Just keep giving us that sweet sweet spice.

Ahmed_Koroma_1382:Thank you for the review. I will go back over the beginning ones. After finishing this volume, I am close to its ending. I have already written the outline for part of the second volume, so I will have some spare time to fix anything that I find wrong. Thank you again for the review.
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Ahmed_Koroma_1382
Ahmed_Koroma_1382Author

I do this as a hobby and don't want to make it about money for now, but maybe in the future, when I feel that my work is worth money. But don't worry, I love writing this story, so I will keep it going for a long time.

Zarion116:No problem author if you set up a patreon or subscribestar I’d subscribe. Just keep giving us that sweet sweet spice.
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Zarion116
Zarion116Lv15

Thank you this book has kinks in it you don’t see unless you got to Archive of our own

Ahmed_Koroma_1382:I do this as a hobby and don't want to make it about money for now, but maybe in the future, when I feel that my work is worth money. But don't worry, I love writing this story, so I will keep it going for a long time.
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Ahmed_Koroma_1382
Ahmed_Koroma_1382Author

I aim to please as much as I can.

Zarion116:Thank you this book has kinks in it you don’t see unless you got to Archive of our own
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Zarion116
Zarion116Lv15

If I could heart the response I would. I appreciate that passion in your hobbie.

Ahmed_Koroma_1382:I aim to please as much as I can.
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Ahmed_Koroma_1382
Ahmed_Koroma_1382Author

I commented on your other post; tell me if it shows up. I also commented on the character's post. For some odd reason, my comments aren't being posted for others to see, but it shows that they're posted on my end.

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Reveal spoiler

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hi, I recently read your book and I really like it, all my stones will go to this book, continue and don't give up on it[img=Loving it] [img=Loving it]

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Shameless author here, I would like to thank you for reading my novel. And any helpful advice would me most appreciated. I would like to thank y'all once again.

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Zarion116
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Congrats on reaching 200 - I hope to see plenty of highschool arcs. So many pigtails. Don’t neglect Anna & friends plus the highschool girls he has already. You really gotta set up a discord with character photos.

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Your getting there keep pushing them out I’ll keep reading them!!! :)

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Saw that latest chapter I’m laughing excitedly. Thank you for being a man of your word.

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_Adam
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This is an amazing story so far. Waiting to see more of the harem development and how they will help the MC. I really recommend it. Keep up the amazing work, Author.

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Soulesti
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Writing this as of Chapter 209. The story is pretty good and interesting. In my opinion we can't get familiar with many of the girls because they have very little screen time or their appearances are too far apart. Sometimes it feels like he forgets about some girls (like the sorority house). as for the writing it's a little fast paced but keeps you in constant excitement but, most of the time the sentences become too long. Also, Punctuation is kinda rough. But overall it's a very entertaining story that gets you excited and keeps you waiting for the next update. A very solid 4/5 read

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Zarion116
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Are u you still doing the part time teacher part time arms dealer arc or is it in the way.

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