Saw that latest chapter I’m laughing excitedly. Thank you for being a man of your word.
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As I said, if I think it's a good idea, I will try my best to add it. I am not a good writer, and I still need a lot of work. But I am down to try anything.
I hope my reply showed up. I'm getting tired of them not doing so, lol.
It did and your fine just proof read your stuff. Don’t be down on yourself like that. Honestly your work has been enticing, kinky and full of endless possibilities. My only personal hang up is the overblown race play. Like there’s A LOT!!! There’s tons of other role play to use. Theres some scenes where U use the race play as a part of it but then Race becomes the Whole theme to it when it didn’t need to be like when he returned to the sorority. Even the white girls. Again it’s not a deal breaker. Your work is yours and it’s up in my top shelf smutty good books.
Ahmed_Koroma_1382:As I said, if I think it's a good idea, I will try my best to add it. I am not a good writer, and I still need a lot of work. But I am down to try anything.
I will work on that. I started to realize it in the last couple of chapters. I need to widen my smutty knowledge. I will focus more on the goddesses and slowly switch to more fantasy aspects, so race play will start to play less of a role. It will still be his kink, but it won't happen as much.
Zarion116:It did and your fine just proof read your stuff. Don’t be down on yourself like that. Honestly your work has been enticing, kinky and full of endless possibilities. My only personal hang up is the overblown race play. Like there’s A LOT!!! There’s tons of other role play to use. Theres some scenes where U use the race play as a part of it but then Race becomes the Whole theme to it when it didn’t need to be like when he returned to the sorority. Even the white girls. Again it’s not a deal breaker. Your work is yours and it’s up in my top shelf smutty good books.
