Writing this as of Chapter 209. The story is pretty good and interesting. In my opinion we can't get familiar with many of the girls because they have very little screen time or their appearances are too far apart. Sometimes it feels like he forgets about some girls (like the sorority house). as for the writing it's a little fast paced but keeps you in constant excitement but, most of the time the sentences become too long. Also, Punctuation is kinda rough. But overall it's a very entertaining story that gets you excited and keeps you waiting for the next update. A very solid 4/5 read
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I shall try to work in more screen time, but with the way I have in mind for the Mc. It's hard for him not to want to add new girls, as with the Title he has been given; he is the embodiment of lust. He tends not to be able to control it, but I will try to cut back on it and add more time for the girls he has. Thank you for the review, and I will try to improve my writing.
Pics not appearing. Also ya all these mother daughter pairs need special outings with him.
Ahmed_Koroma_1382:I shall try to work in more screen time, but with the way I have in mind for the Mc. It's hard for him not to want to add new girls, as with the Title he has been given; he is the embodiment of lust. He tends not to be able to control it, but I will try to cut back on it and add more time for the girls he has. Thank you for the review, and I will try to improve my writing.
If you need to find them, go to my profile, and you should be able to see where I post them.
Zarion116:Pics not appearing. Also ya all these mother daughter pairs need special outings with him.
Found them my dude
Ahmed_Koroma_1382:If you need to find them, go to my profile, and you should be able to see where I post them.
