Now, the story is just beginning, but the author has given us a good start, a character with a context, with abilities and valid reasons why he has them, the timeline is perfect and for the moment I can't find any flaws , maybe a little bit on the writing, but I don't know much about it, and for me it's very well written... Author... I've waited a long time for this moment, to find myself a respectable adventure time ff and here we have a jewel that is going very well... Please don't stop, all adventure time fans are grateful for this ff. ..

Personally I loved it, its both unique while also giving the original the respect it deserves and the author takes the time to make everything chronological. That's really hard do u know how many episodes adventure time has. So not only is the Author talented he's also dedicated enough to make this ff the best it can be. So I highly recommend reading it

the only Adventure Time fic I found, and its well made. I like the idea of MC making History, him being the person to name the continent as OOO will also make him famous in the future along with many of his future achievements. Blanche Petrikov the First Hero of OOO.

This fanfic idea had so much potential, that if written properly, I'm sure that it would be in my top 5 fanfics on this platform. Unfortunately, it has many issues acting as a barrier to its full potential. For most of the fanfic, instead of being immersed in a story of adventure, I felt like I was instead reading a journal of the main character. It doesn't help that for a lot of the chapters, especially in the beginning, the main character breaks the immersion with his summaries of what has happened. There is also the lack of descriptions of the environment, which is something most stories need to give the readers a good idea of what the surroundings of the characters are. I really advise the author to learn and apply the phrase "Show, don't tell." as it is a good way to improve your fanfic immensely. There was also the lack of capitalization and ending punctuations in many of the sentences. Aside from that, the grammar and spelling are fine. Though the sentences did read like I was going through a grade-schooler's work, but that can be attributed to the author not being fluent in english. As for the secondary characters and the main character himself... They're lacking, in my opinion. The mc just goes with the flow, and we don't really see him have meaningful dialogue with other characters that much. And the author doesn't really put in that much effort in developing him. I unfortunately will not continue to read this story. But if you've read my review, disagree, and continue reading yourself, that's fine. Everyone has their own standards and tastes. This fanfic just doesn't correspond with mine.

It’s probably one of the only well written adventure time fanfic I’ve seen, and that’s surprising when the authors first language isn’t English. In general it’s very good, doesn’t rush through scenes, and is well thought out. It’s rare seeing a fic on here that’s well planned, well written, and it doesn’t rush with dumb decisions.

Okay, after I got to chapter 24 I gave up, its hard to read something you’re no longer enjoying, this is a personal preference but I would’ve prepared if he went into a deep sleep in ice or something until canon starts with fin and Jake I get that the Author wants to build a relationship between marcylane and Blanche but it gets to forced after a while, I tried sorry but it’s just not for me.

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5/2/5/5/5. One of the better fics I have read so far it is going great but the updates are definitely a problem.

loved the story wish there was more adventure time fanfics since this is the only good one I found. waiting for the second part to come out hopefully you can recommend some other adventure time fanfics