I'm happy that someone picked this up as I really liked the OG fanfic and was very sad when it was dropped. I can't wait to see what you do with it.

i think i've seen this fanfiction somewhere in the Fanfiction.com but it just got deleted or something but thank you for picking this up :D ..........................

It's just disappointing, to be honest, and is an incredibly stale read. Character development and story development do not feel natural but forced. The quality of writing isn't good enough; the story is basically 'character x says this. Character y is uncertain about this. Character z supports character x. Character y decides it is not a bad idea. Character x then revolutionises his whole kingdom and becomes a superpower.' It doesn't make much sense at all and the attempt to combine GOT and HP is laughable. Within 4 chapters the MC conveniently finds a huge stash of gold which is never mentioned in any iterations of GOT and then it is just brushed over as if that is a normal occurrence. In conclusion, if you want to read an actually good novel, ignore this. If you're up with a meh read that will very mildly satisfy you, feel free to try, but don't say I didn't warn you.

Dude, why are you reincarnating Gabrielle?? Even without her, the story could be good. there is also the problem with how the dialogues are spoken. They come as too straightforward. If you had spent some time, you could have made this better

Amazing story so far, I hope you keep up the great work Author-sama.⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀

I'm happy someone picked this story and continues it. I'm hoping for a harem tho. Gabriela for the north, Daenerys for the middle and Arienne for the south. Thanks again for bringing this story back!

I think it would be better if you made changes to Catelyn's character from much earlier than from where you originally started. As it is the bashing you are throwing at her, doesn't make sense by canon reasoning nor by this story reasoning. While you clearly don't like her, and so the writing starts to conflict.

Reveal spoiler

Although this story is very good in terms of story telling/world building, there are certain areas which would benefit from improvement One of these being the dialogue, which is pretty blocky and not really lifelike- its like talking to Pathfinder in Apex or Connor in Detroit Become Human. Another thing that would benefit is the common sense, like how did the North get access to Rice (Maybe Magic? But Aryan (HP) doesn't have a wand yet so ye) or like how he says "They are katanas, lightweight and capable of cleaving a person in half", which in all honesty, is a common mistake and can be forgiven (Its just here as an example) Think that's it, other than these things, the FanFic is awesome and definitely suggest a read (should you ignore the things above)