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_ST_8244Lv42yr
2022-09-04 09:03

This novel is good how it’s laid out all the information it’s detailed and plots especially from younger and blackfyre is so different. But what was the point of the mc I stopped after the hatch of dragon bit before Daenerys entered the fire. Why because it’s the same not only that the mc bent the knee what was the point for his ancestors mission and people dying in golden company just so he can sit on it. I don’t know if it’s because you rate daenarys highly or something but you removed the role of the mc which is pointless as I was interested and I believe others would as well but to read so much and get to that point and especially her controlling the dragons again instead of the mc or both controlling it just ruined it. You can tell daenarys was never a good queen even in the show and that’s the error you brought which I think would be negative as readers may stop reading after getting to the same part. It is a good novel but I can’t continue cause that part was just wrong and pointless it’s like your making it seem he hasn’t got pure Targaryen blood and which he has more than her by far and still he can’t even be the king. I’ve tried to be fair as possible but the story did not develop the way it should go.

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KojiSan
KojiSanLv14

thats true i stopped at the same chapter, ***** kneeler, all his journey just to replace Jorah as a glorified extra under Daenerys obnoxious ego, gosh i wanted a good Blackfyre fanfiction for so long and this one just disappointed me!

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_ST_8244Lv4

Don’t bother from what I can tell the author favour’s daenarys. If your brought in the gwme of thrones what would you do would you sit back or try and rule your own house or kingdom.

KojiSan:thats true i stopped at the same chapter, ***** kneeler, all his journey just to replace Jorah as a glorified extra under Daenerys obnoxious ego, gosh i wanted a good Blackfyre fanfiction for so long and this one just disappointed me!
2yr
Kiyan_Tribe
Kiyan_TribeLv13

when will start reposting chapters of your fic.

KojiSan:thats true i stopped at the same chapter, ***** kneeler, all his journey just to replace Jorah as a glorified extra under Daenerys obnoxious ego, gosh i wanted a good Blackfyre fanfiction for so long and this one just disappointed me!
2yr
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KojiSan
KojiSanLv14

i started my own asoiaf fanfiction lol, wasnt feeling it for Avatar. but ive been doing world building for a GOT one for weeks. finally started my own :D

Kiyan_Tribe:when will start reposting chapters of your fic.
2yr
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OtakuWeibo
OtakuWeiboAuthor

Here is the proof I got permission to repost

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Truth_Only_Reader
Truth_Only_ReaderLv5

Although not your original work, I appreciate that you credited and got approval for it to be implemented to Webnovel as it is now easier to read. Now to start, this story is pretty good. It includes Young Griff which was something minor in the A Song of Ice and Fire universe and makes it into something bigger. If you are new to the Game of Thrones universe I wouldn't recommend you to read this, just because you will be confused about the entire character and universe and why each event in the story plays out a particular way. Overall it is a really good story and I hope you keep it updated.

2yr
Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6

Nice to read so far. Also good to know that you have asked and given permission by the original fanfic author. Nice to read so far. Also good to know that you have asked and given permission by the original fanfic author.

2yr
Willox
WilloxLv6

I'm curious, will you be expanding once you have caught up to the original work? Or will you continue the story, perhaps you will only share the updated chapters? Whatever it is you will be doing. I thank you for bringing this story to my attention. So thank you and have a nice day.

2yr
Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6

So far good plot and story. excited to read more. So far good plot and story. excited to read more.So far good plot and story. excited to read more.

2yr
SleepingBeauty_
SleepingBeauty_Lv5

Reveal spoiler

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arno00
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