On chapter 13, so halfway through at the time of me writing this review, and I’m gonna drop it right here. The story is following canon WAYYY too closely. I mean, literally 90% of the story stays the same, while like 10% is original. Also, the MC is just pathetic overall, not even being able to kill aliens who he just saw slaughtering humans.
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me gustaGood man. Don't bother starting shit here. Better keep whatever story you wished to make with you, it's healthier that way
Benoit_Valtin:I was about to start fanfiction, but I had the good idea to look at the reviews. Thank you for your comment which saves me from wasting time.
These are not good times, people want blood, tin and spectacles. So if you want to write fan fiction, you need to write about a very cruel and bloodthirsty hero, a sociopath or a real psychopath. If you try to write something newer, lighter, well, the market is busy, I can't say that it will attract a large number of people.
Benoit_Valtin:I was about to start fanfiction, but I had the good idea to look at the reviews. Thank you for your comment which saves me from wasting time.
Enigma_Black:A valid review and entirely true, even if it's difficult to admit. That's the kind of fanfic I'm making so yeah.Thank you for your time though