French_Deadpool

The author writes with artificial intelligence, so the chapters do not necessarily follow each other since the person providing the data does not necessarily pay attention to these details, which is what happens with fake authors.

with writing with artificial intelligence and it is not rare that the chapters do not follow each other and as the one who dictates the elements of the story has not really paid ultra attention to detail and well there you go

10/20 we are not afraid enough of Xavier at all, if he really had the comics he should know that you had one of the craziest mutants who can arrive with his powers and should absolutely be careful of his mental barrier

08/20 many cliché and stupid sentences they really say ... and especially the first thing I would have done is first to test the flight, it is one of the main abilities of the Green lanterns allowing them to go to different Galaxy. then before testing all the wacky techniques of the clients seen in books, I would have also tested a main ability that is to say the mental construction make horses make firearms make swords and after only test all the stupid stuff from the comics

Écrit par une machine

Nul

This is terribly evasive, clearly AI writing. 04 out of 20 for human effort

written by a machine

as I said before your "pat" is way too expensive for the few chapters available

Obviously B as long as you know the characters and their mentality that's enough, you can integrate the MC who shakes everything up and you rewrite your sauce.