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BrandPatriarch
BrandPatriarchLv101yr
2023-04-24 04:33

I just stard reading but alread fells some emotion conection with this one so wull give a 5 stars cause a great One Piece fanfic should be able to evoke strong emotions in the reader. Whether it's joy, sadness, excitement, or fear, the best fanfics can create a powerful emotional connection with their readers.

Suddenly in One Piece!!! (Hiatus)

Sleepy_Head_
4.5
61 Chs

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BeastMaster64
BeastMaster64Lv1

Love this fanfics so far its now in my library and i'm excited to see where you will go with this fanfics

3yr

Luviyyaaa
LuviyyaaaLv1

I love the story very much!!! I wish i can read another chap. Keep ur spirit up author! I'm waiting for ur new update [img=recommend]. Stay healthy too <3

3yr
ZhangYexuan
ZhangYexuanLv14

I'll keep it short, an amazing find like that of a treasure box filled with golds, jewels, etc. Can't say much more, though it won't let me post if I don't put enough words...

3yr
LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33Lv4

Loved the story so far hope to read more soon, keep up the good work =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =)

3yr
hadaranza_Q
hadaranza_QLv2

Yeni bölüm nerde yeni bölüm istirem ağağağağa yeni bölümmm one piçi seviyorum ve bunu okumakta eğlenceli cidden eglenceli okurken sıkılmıyorum

3yr
sunranaka
sunranakaLv4

The biggest problem is that there isn't more of it. ...................................................................................................

2yr
R0B
R0BLv2

Not a great, but a good fiction nonetheless 👍 But I would like more structure, the system is ... Whimsical. I still don't understand how can mc afford a devil fruit... At best she earned 1mln berry, but a simple paramecia is 100 mln berry, not to mention logia. Mc is also a moron for... forgetting she has a system... And even then she doesn't use it fully... Adding a twin to the mix is.. bs. Just add her from the very beginning if you want... As for tomas... I only have one problem with him. He doesn't have a body... On the other hand you have a mc with devil fruit that can grant him his body... Why did you make Tomas cheat from the very beginning by giving him the ability to create his own body?... By your logic he then can also recreate Kado body and possess it. Author - stop cheating! You have to follow the rules of the world!

2yr
ArtemisBlake
ArtemisBlakeLv3

I like that fic a lot, hope you keep a good job 👍 Thought i think it's a bit slow, but it's still better than 3/4 of the others stories in this site

2yr
Yasser_El_Habrouk
Yasser_El_HabroukLv4

i love that there are no boring details . when are you going to write again ? i hope it's soon

1yr
ReaderCat
ReaderCatLv2

I like it, but it hasn't been updated in three months. I will still read it and keep it in my library. I hope the author continues this series.

1yr
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