Love this fanfics so far its now in my library and i'm excited to see where you will go with this fanfics

I love the story very much!!! I wish i can read another chap. Keep ur spirit up author! I'm waiting for ur new update [img=recommend]. Stay healthy too <3

I'll keep it short, an amazing find like that of a treasure box filled with golds, jewels, etc. Can't say much more, though it won't let me post if I don't put enough words...

Loved the story so far hope to read more soon, keep up the good work =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =)

The biggest problem is that there isn't more of it. ...................................................................................................

Not a great, but a good fiction nonetheless 👍 But I would like more structure, the system is ... Whimsical. I still don't understand how can mc afford a devil fruit... At best she earned 1mln berry, but a simple paramecia is 100 mln berry, not to mention logia. Mc is also a moron for... forgetting she has a system... And even then she doesn't use it fully... Adding a twin to the mix is.. bs. Just add her from the very beginning if you want... As for tomas... I only have one problem with him. He doesn't have a body... On the other hand you have a mc with devil fruit that can grant him his body... Why did you make Tomas cheat from the very beginning by giving him the ability to create his own body?... By your logic he then can also recreate Kado body and possess it. Author - stop cheating! You have to follow the rules of the world!

I like that fic a lot, hope you keep a good job 👍 Thought i think it's a bit slow, but it's still better than 3/4 of the others stories in this site

i love that there are no boring details . when are you going to write again ? i hope it's soon

I like it, but it hasn't been updated in three months. I will still read it and keep it in my library. I hope the author continues this series.