Writer write on darling, love your good work. Perfect description, heart dropping lines. Bless the work of your hands.

writer, write on. sending love is on the way.

Strong book you have going on here, you have my vote and stone for your hard work dear author.

Powerful intro. Compassionate characters. please, maintain the streak dear author.

The author aims to please. I hope this book helps you in ways possible.

Your insightful inputs are straight to the point like that of an eagle's eye. I will aim to please even more.

Thank you for that keen eyesight alu_sachi, I have updated it following your advice, hope my book serves to help you in any way possible

You're decent with words. I like it, keep up the good work author

Okay, reading it, Natalia's comforting words didn't flow with the mc voice. Her response sounded off. It's a good book, I loved it.

Aww, your synopsis spelt weirdo alert, I was initially scared, but after reading from you, I am happy to see your work change my perspectives. Enjoy your day, and thank you for taking the time on this book.

Everything was going so well till Natalia's last comforting speech to cade, now you make that cutting, loving your intro

This would make a good story, so I encourage you to give it a revisit. Beautiful story

Yep, now this is what I am talking about

Oh, believe me, that put a smile on my face. I am in aww of your storyline.

I hope it helps you solve uncertainties and comfort you in times of need. It's as comical as it is educational

No qualms, great skills like yours and others deserve the upvote

The words are well-tailored to details, the English run smoothly, great storyline, with greater author behind its creation

Lol, smoking kills not saves. It even steals beauty and friends, leaving you with crooked teeth. Put a reader's discretion on this one, author. Great work you have going on here

I hope all is well with you mate. Your work looks promising.

@Hanand-giri my novel script is tailored to change your mind once you get to reading.