Continue this please!

Too many misspellings. Have not been updated in a year. Falling source material. No description of character design, only my names. How much world building, no description of structure or setting.

100%

It’s oh ok. But the story is pretty bad.

One of the best, Naruto fanfics I have readied. Best mizukage story, also Karatachi clan. The funniest part is that at the end of chapter 16? As he bless the whole Karatachi clan he some how get shorter 🤣. Hey! Theory here! The more powerful a Karatachi is, the shorter they’re!😂[img=recommend]

It getting Better and better!

The New World should be happening in the 20s as anything else, I will be die.

I’m sorry, your warning is too late. I have high resistance to cringe. But I think I’m about to puke.

I just don’t like the fact that a mentally 30 or so year-old, lusted over a 18-year-old. And also the possessiveness just remind me of wattpad, it’s cringe. Also, can the main harem be from the New World? Having real actual people just… don’t feel really comfortable.

I’ll say it’s one of the better books. I just wish that the voting can end faster, considering that it’s wonderful. I don’t know what to put in the comment section. I think I should go now.

It have not even started and it ended.

… not very inspirational when you look at what they actually did!

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A talisman that hides presence…. we heard something like that from tool number two, right?

That’s because there’s none in the current generation!

There’s really a lot of things going on huh.

Why didn’t I just notice this until now. The Yuki clan have the ice kekkei genkai. The ice kekkei genkai is the mix of water and wind chakra.

This feels robotic.

Please! Update! Just a few more chapters! Please!

I love the story. But why don’t it just update! I mean The story is amazing! And it can go on for hundreds of chapter but it just don’t! I wish it just keep going! The creator of the story clearly discarded it but I just wish it not!