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Thx, sir.

If you reach far enough, you'll find some justification for it in a chapter.

Another suggestion from is me, to please try to read the 10 chapters. If you don't like it until that leave it. I know it's on me for not making the start that interesting but give it a try. It might change your mind.[img=recommend]

Thank you for your criticism. I'll try to write a better introduction in my other novels

At least for the first arc, yes. The focus changes as the novel focuses on different kingdoms

Multiple leads and the romance is convoluted. I better call it no romance at all.

Hello, I have updated the link. I hope it's working. Also, Thank you for Pointing it out.

no, sir. Thank you for the comment

I apologise for not updating the chapters, as much as I want to publish. I am pushing hard for my exam preparations as they are very important for my future. The regular schedule will come back for a short part of February maybe 10-15 chapters and followed by another break. I will be 100% consistent in the next July. Please Endure till then, I will always be updating a chapter monthly and the filler arc is always there. Thank you for being there, it really made my day to have a friend like you.

Can you help with the consistency part? I want to know how I can improve that. It would be really helpful.

Thank you.

How to fix this? A Complete rewrite or some minor changes.

Well, I can agree the first volume is the weakest part of the story. Well any recommendations?

Ah.... Thank you for reminding me, I never realised the one and two were swapped

you reading this means. People are actually noticing it. Thank you ;)

Thank you, sire. I really apperaciate it.

Thanks, your words are quite appreciated. :)

Yours welcome, and the thanks is very much appreciated.

Wait how do send these gif and pick in the comments.