Thank you so much...and I will try to implement your advice.

Thank you so much 🤗

The story is different from most of the detective novels I read... the world is building and the characters are evolving with evolving as the story progresses is the great thing about this novel...there are a few setbacks though, as the author seems to be the new one, but it would be a good read..worth your time.

Thank you so much...

The story got an interesting plot...like the way the characters are taking turns... the world building is different, from most of the novels I read...in all, I would suggest this novel, if you want a good read...

The story got an interesting plot, I read every novel about vampires which explores this kind of character this novel explores...mc seems good and refreshing...different from usual vampire stories.., though I think the writer is new, so it is best to ignore the grammar, and give a try to this novel...its get better as the story progresses.

I can just hope to surprise you...

I do agree with you.., thank you for the clarity.

Hello sir...Mc is the evil, in the sense of, following the conventional rules. He doesn't kill children or women until it's very necessary because he doesn't like to abuse his power on weaker people. Instead, he searches for a strong enemy and pushes his limit, to defeat him. But this is just the beginning, Mc will have to push his limits to acquire power in hell, it will go darker because that is what this place does to everyone.

Hello sir, I know what you are talking about. yes, I did all of that in my insecurities a long time ago, while then I realised it was wrong, so I stopped. I was new then, I hope you are kind enough to ignore this and give a chance to my work. thank you...

sure...that is very good idea...i will think about it.

And also the story has potential...you should give try to this novel.

Thank you for the suggestion...I will keep that in mind, and make it better.

I like the idea... it's captivating...world-building and the plot are nice.. the charactors development is good...though I feel it would be more enjoyable if things move a little faster...

soon... it's almost there.

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My first book. thinking about it for a long time and finally did. I believe the story has a great story and very good characters which will evolve as the story unfolds.