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Strike The Sun!

Magical Realism
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What is Strike The Sun!

Lee la novela Strike The Sun! escrita por el autor onemeterofsky publicada en WebNovel. The Sun had mutated and had raised the radiation levels in the Earth.Three years have passed since this apocalyse occured. Humanity begins to rise up against the challenges caused by this phenomenon.J...

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The Sun had mutated and had raised the radiation levels in the Earth. Three years have passed since this apocalyse occured. Humanity begins to rise up against the challenges caused by this phenomenon. Join Allen Stryka as he journeys towards beating the source of humanity's misfortune - The Sun itself!

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

What a revolutionary idea! The thoughts of creating such a masterpiece! I must say this has potential and I enjoyed my time reading this. The flow and sentence structure is on point. I must say I didn't stutter at all! I am hoping to see this novel last till its end. This is good! So keep writing! You got enormous potential!

supporthero
supportheroLv11supporthero

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Helldragon_xd
Helldragon_xdLv1Helldragon_xd

The characters are well-written and world design is great. Some issues I would focus on is the character texts could use slightly better formatting and the tempo of revealing information. This is just my personal preferance, when you talked about the mutations that occurred from the sun I think revealing that humans have also developed powers in chapter one serves the story's pacing better. You can add more information like how it might be very rare to occur, and then Allen managing to develop one is like winning a lottery or something. I think also telling how Allen plans to destroy the sun, aside from having flame powers, should also be elaborated in chapter 2. It's just my view on it though, the story overall is still written well.

man_k
man_kLv1man_k

I like the idea... it's captivating...world-building and the plot are nice.. the charactors development is good...though I feel it would be more enjoyable if things move a little faster...

Inochishirazu_06
Inochishirazu_06Lv1Inochishirazu_06

I'm not familiar with giving book reviews but here it goes. The story is interesting and entertaining, the events are somewhat new to me and that makes me curious on how the story will go. The last chapter feels like a cliffhanger, for me that is. The narration is smooth, not too complicated nor to vague and it's not confusing. It's a great story.

Melsdar
MelsdarLv10Melsdar

A good and unique story with a pretty interesting plot. I also like some of the characters. I'm really looking forward to the continuation. Hopefully it doesn't stop halfway. I'm sure your story will be a success, I'm looking forward to it!

TysonBoss
TysonBossLv1TysonBoss

I'm liking the premise, though I feel that a lot more descriptions could be added. This is a very different world from the one we live in, so why not describe the superpowers in more detail? Also, it's personally hard for me to imagine that the MC is 25-years-old given the thinking that we've been exposed to, but perhaps this will be explained later. I am enjoying the story so far, a lot of things are happening, which is nice.

PRO_GAMER_2345
PRO_GAMER_2345Lv3PRO_GAMER_2345

Really like how the author wrote the story using a new approach. The story highlights the characters fully. Although there are some things not explained fully. It has great potential to be a good novel. Looking forward to it.

onemeterofsky
onemeterofskyAutoronemeterofsky

Hello Author here. Please do try out this novel. I try to improve my writing style as I upload further and further. So don't hesitate to comment if you do find some corrections.. Fun fact: if you read the title phonetically, it might sound like "Stryka-san!" So perhaps this is a story about Mr. Stryka all along...

Prideful_Enigma
Prideful_EnigmaLv1Prideful_Enigma

I like the premise of the story and the characters, despite having similarities with common tropes, seems like they have potential. The main plot is interesting yet it leaves a lot of questions which is fine, the only problem I have is the errors that appears from time to time. Godspeed author, you've got potential to be great

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