And these aren't even novels, these are fanfiction that's worth nothing but a possible case for copyright infringement. If you did have a novel of your own, with original work and original characters you made, then I'll have shut up. But you don't, just an over inflated sense of your own skills and a shitty attitude. So have some humility, at least.

Not my novels, dipshit. And that's an arrogant reply from someone who can't even finish what he started. Maybe it's good enough not to finish then? The story is already done after just a few chapters? That's a stretch from any but pathetic is still pathetic

This is such a malicious review that I'm surprised it's even here. And he's giving advice too even after not doing anything of note to show how great his work is compared to others. Pathetic negative loser. Don't mind him author

Just finished chapter one and I nearly slept my ass off because of how boring this is. I expected better after all the puffery but meh. What a waste of time and will not recommend.

Wow. What a big baby. Tough words for someone who can't even make any works of his own and just settle on shitting on others

Good man. Don't bother starting shit here. Better keep whatever story you wished to make with you, it's healthier that way

Not necessarily my thing, but I see what you're trying to do and appreciate it. Keep it up champ

Huh, I kinda missed that. Thank you for the critique. I'm sure the other chapters will have something else.

oh I don't have one of those man. I mostly post for fun

what's a discord?

That's my mom man. Just...Yeah

you should really delete this man

Hey man! I dig the Sentry name!

oh my God. I love that you included her in this. Remember Wildstorm

Ain't this supposed to be a fanfic that you can just enjoy reading and not nitpick?

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