Garbage lol. Here’s a piece of advice, author: If you don’t know how to write romance, don’t put it in your novel. The love interest falls in love with him simply because he had a pained look in his eyes and he doesn’t look at her with lust? Are you kidding me? At least think of a better reason than that, idiot
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me gustaNot my novels, dipshit. And that's an arrogant reply from someone who can't even finish what he started. Maybe it's good enough not to finish then? The story is already done after just a few chapters? That's a stretch from any but pathetic is still pathetic
Kw0z:You have two novels that are both garbage, while I’ve had multiple good novels that I deleted. And I gave him the reason his novel isn’t good, cry me a river
You have two novels that are both garbage, while I’ve had multiple good novels that I deleted. And I gave him the reason his novel isn’t good, cry me a river
Enigma_Green:This is such a malicious review that I'm surprised it's even here. And he's giving advice too even after not doing anything of note to show how great his work is compared to others. Pathetic negative loser. Don't mind him author