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MrIIIo29minComentado porthid what it feels like to have Todo as an enemy
However, in the last second…no, less than a second, the Juggernaut activated its aura as the space distorted while red and black lighting shot out.- MrIIIo3hComentado por
glad to see you are back bro, lookijg forward to more chapters!!
Thank you all for not removing this from your Library. - MrIIIo3hrespondió a Lord_Cynrik
nah he said he had to get used to his new ability post timeskip, he wouldnt say that after 2 years
Fortunately, two seconds was plenty of time for Augur to warp Blackbeard out of there. - MrIIIo10hrespondió a OMN1CR0N_GAMING
that can easily be negotiated, a show of power and they could become 'partners'. Just having the mc on his side would already be a great win in Fisk's eyes
"Oh did I not mention it?" Dominic let out a cocky laugh as he lit his cigar once again, "He's the Kingpin, now you may not know who he is but the one thing you should know is that he doesn't take kindly to refusals." - MrIIIo10hrespondió a Passerby_Venne
hahahaha, yeah that's true, you completely demolished me tho, atomized mr
"Don't worry too much, it'll be fun." Ace said, trying to relieve them of their worries. - MrIIIo12hrespondió a HeliosTheDepressed[Image (In Discord)]
- MrIIIo13hrespondió a BowFilthyMortal
thats not the point im making bro, and its a tarrible argument
So I've made a horrible mistake, I wrongly remembered that Law was one of the few people that had conqueror's haki! But I remembered incorrectly, it was Kidd that had it. - MrIIIo13hrespondió a Passerby_Venne
i got completely attacked hahahahahha
"Don't worry too much, it'll be fun." Ace said, trying to relieve them of their worries. - MrIIIo19hPublicado por
I like the idea of the story and the comedic interactions are really funny, but it just feels like the story lacks depth. The impactful moments feel weak, for example, the whole situation with Nami's trauma of the Arlong crew. It was done so quickly like the author was in a hurry to finish it instead of fleshing it out. This happens multiple times showing that the fast pace causes a lack of story development. It just feels that the story is lacking due to a lack of planning.
- MrIIIo20hrespondió a fumma
if you cover up mistakes by using AU as an excuse that's just bad writing
So I've made a horrible mistake, I wrongly remembered that Law was one of the few people that had conqueror's haki! But I remembered incorrectly, it was Kidd that had it. - MrIIIo20hrespondió a Fullety1009
Oden's father and Oden himself could also read, I think Vegapunk also figured it out
She won't actually be joining. She's not fated to be in his crew sadly. Nami is the only one from the original straw hats to join Demon Ace Pirates. - MrIIIo20hComentado por
why did you add this?
Although those that can control their haki can somewhat stop others from sensing the quality of their haki, just the same way as they can release it to make others pressured by their life force or aura, it's impossible to completely hide their lifeforce. - MrIIIo20hComentado por
crocodile is a lot stronger when in the desert tho
"Don't worry too much, it'll be fun." Ace said, trying to relieve them of their worries. - MrIIIo20hComentado por
tbh i don't like the 4 useless extra's, They just dont feel like the type of characters who will have a lot of character depth
At the moment, including the captain, they had 9 members. - MrIIIo20hComentado por
nah they ain't stop yapping
'hmm... Gaga is talented as well,.although spikewards, Yennow and Gaga aren't on Urouge, Apoo and Bonney's level of potential, they are close.' Ace thought as he watched the fight with interest. - MrIIIo20hComentado por
he would probably awaken his fruit by the time luffy sets sail
But this time, he had received the abilities since his reincarnation which made him very, very capable. - MrIIIo20hrespondió a Vastoking
yeah but Arlong has enough treasure piled up from his years of pillaging, they could take a bit for now
"He is a friend!" Nami said as she saw their reaction. - MrIIIo21hComentado por
bro is just gonna take a seat next to them and take part in the feast
He walked inside and found lots of fishmen having a feast. But no one seemed to notice that a human had walked in. - MrIIIo21hrespondió a Emmanuel_Capricorn
actually ace always had a normal laugh
"You don't have to, I'm a pirate, I stole you!" Ace said with a gigantic grin as if he checkmated her. - MrIIIo21hrespondió a bearburrable
yeah, tbh we could seperate them into pirates, adventurers and true pirates
"Those who use others as tools are scum, but those who assume that every one is scum, is worse than scum." Ace said with his hat hiding his eyes.