MrIIIo
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"looks at straw hats"
thid what it feels like to have Todo as an enemy
glad to see you are back bro, lookijg forward to more chapters!!
nah he said he had to get used to his new ability post timeskip, he wouldnt say that after 2 years
that can easily be negotiated, a show of power and they could become 'partners'. Just having the mc on his side would already be a great win in Fisk's eyes
hahahaha, yeah that's true, you completely demolished me tho, atomized mr
thats not the point im making bro, and its a tarrible argument
i got completely attacked hahahahahha
I like the idea of the story and the comedic interactions are really funny, but it just feels like the story lacks depth. The impactful moments feel weak, for example, the whole situation with Nami's trauma of the Arlong crew. It was done so quickly like the author was in a hurry to finish it instead of fleshing it out. This happens multiple times showing that the fast pace causes a lack of story development. It just feels that the story is lacking due to a lack of planning.
if you cover up mistakes by using AU as an excuse that's just bad writing
Oden's father and Oden himself could also read, I think Vegapunk also figured it out
why did you add this?
crocodile is a lot stronger when in the desert tho
tbh i don't like the 4 useless extra's, They just dont feel like the type of characters who will have a lot of character depth
nah they ain't stop yapping
he would probably awaken his fruit by the time luffy sets sail
yeah but Arlong has enough treasure piled up from his years of pillaging, they could take a bit for now
bro is just gonna take a seat next to them and take part in the feast