At first, Cece saw nothing, but then her eyes adjusted, and she was able to see just on the other side of the courtyard. There was Mason, wearing an untuck shirt, with patchy pants, his hair damp as if he had just washed it. Cece leaned forward, squinting to see Mason place his hands on a woman's belly, kissing her lips.
I love it! Author, please stop second doubting yourself, this piece is amazing! Keep up the great work dearie, and your characters feel so real, a world sweeping me off my feet.
This story pulled me in, creating a world I'd never seen or been described of before. Your words have a way of making it vivid and real as possible. Please keep up the work, author. :)
Honestly this dark tale had me ensared from the moment it said "Keep it mundane." Your words have a way to painting these scenarios to life, I felt like I was watching a movie. Very interesting with original ideas and so much more. Keep at it, author, you're doing great!