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The Curse Of The Evil Queen

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"I swear in the heavens! I will return and will make you pay for your blasphemy! None of you can escape the vengeance that I will inflict as it will hunt you until death. Protect your family and your children as I will come back to them again! Even if it's not today or in the future generations, I promise to make your lives a living hell! Even the netherworld can't do anything to stop my retaliation! I swear Dear Princess Angelica and your dearest Prince. All of you, together with your children will pay as everyone will burn in Hell with me!" *** Queen Adrianne, the Kingdom of Quirrene’s most powerful vampire was betrayed and executed by her own subjects. Being portrayed as an evil queen, the curse of her death was feared amongst all. After four hundred years of waiting, she’s back, possessing the body of a ten-year-old child. She would then try her best to fulfill the vengeance she wished for. With the curse in her hands, how can people get away when rage already surrounds her heart? After all the new changes in her Kingdom, can she still regain the title that she lost? The thing is... what can she possibly do to be the best? To be the most powerful of them all. ---- You can check out my new novel "First Female Chief God" :) Discord: Wateristubeg#0479

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Verhygo
VerhygoLv12Verhygo

I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 4. (Because there wasn't more published yet.) Writing Quality: There are some noticeable mistakes there, but nothing major. The descriptions and emotional display are great. Story Development: The story develops at a comfortable speed. With good insight on motivations and goals. Character Design: The evil queen is good established, her motivations are clear as well as her goal. She's not unlikable, but rather very reasonable. At least until now. The full extent of her evil side is not yet fully shown. Update stability: What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess... World Background: No exposition dumps, the world is interesting and introduced naturally through dialog. Summary: An interesting concept, I am intrigued. It's very difficult to handle a anti hero or even villainous character while still keeping them relatable and interesting. I look forward to more chapters, to see if it works.

Light_ray
Light_rayLv13Light_ray

The author always surprises with her work. The character of the FL portrayed exuberantly. Just by the synopsis and a few chapters one can tell it will not only give you chills but also the excitement - what will happen next. All the best for Spirity, author-San.

Aislinn_Jasper
Aislinn_JasperLv3Aislinn_Jasper

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hideout22
hideout22Lv10hideout22

Okay, for the plot it has potential. I really like the story. But how the story develops feels like it is kinda dragging. There are some scenes that I find unnecessary for the story. And how the world is describe is a bit here and there. Like the author is still confuse on what ambiance he or she wants the readers to picture. Hope this review helps you improve your story. Btw I was already at chap 77 when I had enough. It is just so confusing for me. Hopefully you can polish this because the story is good but how it was executed is not. But hey there is still room for improvement.

sky_maiden
sky_maidenLv13sky_maiden

Just started reading this book. But I'm already hooked up. Fantasy Romance is ❤️❤️❤️. Will continue to support this book. Highly Recommended! 💯

Ken_5osuke
Ken_5osukeLv1Ken_5osuke

REVOLUTION GOES BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!! I love the story. My nose went bleeding coz of the grammar... it's perfect... unlike mine... But anyway good luck to the cute author!!! Hope more chapters will come!

WaTeR
WaTeRLv2WaTeR

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THE_WORDSMITH
THE_WORDSMITHLv2THE_WORDSMITH

I liked how the Author wrote Adrianne, the 'Evil Queen'. Her domineering attitude and unyielding will are suitable for a QUEEN. The other thing is how Abigail is completely the opposite of Adrianne. The two characters exist to add contrast and color to each other. Till now the development of the story is quite digestible. Good work, looking forward to furthering updates.

cherlyswan
cherlyswanLv10cherlyswan

The feels, the chills, the story development, the characters, the curiosity. With just four chapters, this story has caught my heart and I'm sure it will catch yours too!! I highly recommend you make space for this in your library!!! All the best author-nim! I'm here to support you all the way!

shrEk2o3
shrEk2o3Lv12shrEk2o3

5/5 because the author has outdone herself. The writing quality is amazing, I couldn't put the book down. As the story progresses, you get hooked wanting to know what happens next. Tbh, I want to fast forward it to the time when the evil queen regains her power. I love vampire stories and this novel has a unique plot twist. You can either love or hate Adrianne, but I hope she gets to have her revenge. Great job author-nim! 😍♥️

AinaWang
AinaWangLv12AinaWang

5/5 (๑ↀᆺↀ๑) This is a very good story! (*Φ皿Φ*) The way the author described each scene was marvelous ฅ(*ΦωΦ*) ฅ The pacing of the story is fine, too! ~((Φ◇Φ)‡ Very recommended, and looking forward to more chaps! ヽ(ΦωΦヽ)

wounded_warrior
wounded_warriorLv14wounded_warrior

I love it! Can't wait to read more! Please publish more chapters! 🥺👉👈 It's very well written, if haven't added it to your library you better cause you're missing out!

Bad_Totodile
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Elyon
ElyonLv15Elyon

I have to admit, the first few chapters caught me by surprise. The "conditions" were a fairly new concept (at least for me) and I find it a refreshing read. Kudos to the author for doing a good job. May you find inspiration as you write this amazing story.

docaqui
docaquiLv11docaqui

the world background is nice and detailed. u can actually see how the author would want his readers to see the world that the characters were living in. the story is fantastic and the development is thrilling.

Monachre
MonachreLv3Monachre

Oh my gosh, this book is worth reading, I'm not fond of vampire books but this exceeds my expectations. Now, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good job author!!

Madyan_wani
Madyan_waniLv10Madyan_wani

omoo this book is lit. I love the plot. The synopsis is too intriguing. The bg,scenario and description are well defined. Best of luck to writer.Xoxo

TheUnknownEntity
TheUnknownEntityLv4TheUnknownEntity

Me will stockpile this before reading it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

CREATIVE_SPACE
CREATIVE_SPACELv2CREATIVE_SPACE

Wow😍 To begin with, I would like to comment on the first chapter. What an interesting start. It is enough to captivate the reader's attention. The way the author described the scenes and emotions is truly amazing. Already in love with the FL. Would look forward to further chapters. Good luck author!!

ZJJung
ZJJungLv13ZJJung

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