I just finished going through and editing all of the chapters and breaking up the paragraphs more where I can. Thanks again for the feedback!

School settings are definitely one of my favorite arcs. Tons of good material there.

That's totally fair! King Magnus and King Edgar were the ones saying that they had some time because the darkness hadn't been seen in their kingdom as far as they knew. King Theos disagreed saying that they should still hurry even if there isn't an immediate need for a hero.

It really helps that I read a lot and watch a lot of anime/other shows. I like to be able to imagine the scene in my head and then describe it.

Thank you so much for the kind words! I definitely have a lot of ideas, and I can't wait to put them all down!

It's pretty interesting so far. I enjoy the world building along with the great detail and description in all the scenes. The intro of the little girl was interesting too and sets up a lot of intrigue.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll see where I can break up the paragraphs more.

The masterfully crafted world enthralls readers with its captivating blend of fantasy and reality. Anna's journey through virtual heroism and real-life challenges strikes a compelling balance, navigating the complexities of online connection and everyday pressures with emotional depth. A must-read for anyone seeking a VR story.

Golden halberd design

Arlo in golden armor

I don't think the exchange is fair. I think Valdel can contribute more to the story's growth than Lisa can.

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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon